{"id":27436,"date":"2024-09-09T16:47:44","date_gmt":"2024-09-09T09:47:44","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/etest.edu.vn\/?p=27436"},"modified":"2024-09-09T17:18:29","modified_gmt":"2024-09-09T10:18:29","slug":"coherence-and-cohesion","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/etest.edu.vn\/en\/coherence-and-cohesion\/","title":{"rendered":"Coherence and Cohesion l\u00e0 g\u00ec? B\u00ed k\u00edp ghi \u0111i\u1ec3m trong IELTS Writing"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>Trong s\u1ed1 b\u1ed1n ti\u00eau ch\u00ed ch\u1ee7 ch\u1ed1t m\u00e0 gi\u00e1m kh\u1ea3o s\u1eed d\u1ee5ng \u0111\u1ec3 ch\u1ea5m \u0111i\u1ec3m, &#8220;<a href=\"https:\/\/etest.edu.vn\/en\/coherence-and-cohesion\/\"><strong>Coherence and Cohesion<\/strong><\/a>&#8221; (M\u1ea1ch l\u1ea1c v\u00e0 Li\u00ean k\u1ebft) chi\u1ebfm t\u1edbi 25% t\u1ed5ng \u0111i\u1ec3m. Ti\u00eau ch\u00ed n\u00e0y \u0111\u00e1nh gi\u00e1 kh\u1ea3 n\u0103ng c\u1ee7a b\u1ea1n trong vi\u1ec7c t\u1ed5 ch\u1ee9c \u00fd t\u01b0\u1edfng m\u1ed9t c\u00e1ch r\u00f5 r\u00e0ng v\u00e0 logic, \u0111\u1ed3ng th\u1eddi s\u1eed d\u1ee5ng c\u00e1c li\u00ean k\u1ebft hi\u1ec7u qu\u1ea3 \u0111\u1ec3 k\u1ebft n\u1ed1i c\u00e1c ph\u1ea7n c\u1ee7a b\u00e0i vi\u1ebft.<\/p>\n<figure id=\"attachment_27440\" aria-describedby=\"caption-attachment-27440\" style=\"width: 870px\" class=\"wp-caption aligncenter\"><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"wp-image-27440 size-full\" src=\"https:\/\/etest.edu.vn\/wp-content\/uploads\/2024\/09\/coherence-and-cohesion.jpg\" alt=\"coherence and cohesion\" width=\"870\" height=\"570\" srcset=\"https:\/\/etest.edu.vn\/wp-content\/uploads\/2024\/09\/coherence-and-cohesion.jpg 870w, https:\/\/etest.edu.vn\/wp-content\/uploads\/2024\/09\/coherence-and-cohesion-611x400.jpg 611w, https:\/\/etest.edu.vn\/wp-content\/uploads\/2024\/09\/coherence-and-cohesion-768x503.jpg 768w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 870px) 100vw, 870px\" \/><figcaption id=\"caption-attachment-27440\" class=\"wp-caption-text\">Coherence and Cohesion l\u00e0 g\u00ec? B\u00ed k\u00edp ghi \u0111i\u1ec3m trong IELTS Writing<\/figcaption><\/figure>\n<p>So,\u00a0<strong>Coherence v\u00e0 Cohesion l\u00e0 g\u00ec<\/strong>\u00a0v\u00e0 l\u00e0m th\u1ebf n\u00e0o \u0111\u1ec3 b\u1ea1n t\u1ed1i \u01b0u h\u00f3a ch\u00fang trong b\u00e0i vi\u1ebft c\u1ee7a m\u00ecnh? H\u00e3y c\u00f9ng\u00a0<strong>ETEST English for Study Abroad<\/strong>\u00a0t\u00ecm hi\u1ec3u b\u00ed k\u00edp \u0111\u1ec3 ghi \u0111i\u1ec3m\u00a0<a href=\"https:\/\/etest.edu.vn\/en\/ielts-writing\/\"><strong>IELTS Writing<\/strong><\/a>\u00a0qua b\u00e0i vi\u1ebft sau!<\/p>\n<h2><strong>Coherence and Cohesion l\u00e0 g\u00ec?<\/strong><\/h2>\n<p><strong>Coherence and Cohesion<\/strong>\u00a0l\u00e0 hai kh\u00e1i ni\u1ec7m quan tr\u1ecdng trong vi\u1ec7c \u0111\u00e1nh gi\u00e1 ch\u1ea5t l\u01b0\u1ee3ng c\u1ee7a m\u1ed9t b\u00e0i vi\u1ebft.<\/p>\n<p>D\u01b0\u1edbi \u0111\u00e2y l\u00e0 gi\u1ea3i th\u00edch chi ti\u1ebft v\u1ec1 t\u1eebng kh\u00e1i ni\u1ec7m:<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li><strong>Coherence (T\u00ednh m\u1ea1ch l\u1ea1c):\u00a0<\/strong>L\u00e0 kh\u1ea3 n\u0103ng t\u1ed5 ch\u1ee9c v\u00e0 truy\u1ec1n \u0111\u1ea1t \u00fd t\u01b0\u1edfng m\u1ed9t c\u00e1ch r\u00f5 r\u00e0ng v\u00e0 logic, gi\u00fap ng\u01b0\u1eddi \u0111\u1ecdc d\u1ec5 hi\u1ec3u n\u1ed9i dung b\u00e0i vi\u1ebft.<\/li>\n<li><strong>Cohesion (T\u00ednh li\u00ean k\u1ebft):<\/strong>\u00a0L\u00e0 c\u00e1ch k\u1ebft n\u1ed1i c\u00e1c ph\u1ea7n c\u1ee7a b\u00e0i vi\u1ebft th\u00f4ng qua t\u1eeb n\u1ed1i v\u00e0 c\u00e1c ph\u01b0\u01a1ng ph\u00e1p ng\u1eef ph\u00e1p, \u0111\u1ea3m b\u1ea3o r\u1eb1ng c\u00e1c c\u00e2u v\u00e0 \u0111o\u1ea1n v\u0103n li\u00ean k\u1ebft ch\u1eb7t ch\u1ebd v\u1edbi nhau.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>C\u1ea3 hai y\u1ebfu t\u1ed1 n\u00e0y \u0111\u1ec1u quan tr\u1ecdng trong vi\u1ec7c t\u1ea1o ra m\u1ed9t b\u00e0i vi\u1ebft hi\u1ec7u qu\u1ea3. Coherence and Cohesion l\u00e0 m\u1ed9t trong 4\u00a0<a href=\"https:\/\/etest.edu.vn\/en\/tieu-chi-cham-ielts-writing\/\"><strong>IELTS Writing scoring criteria<\/strong><\/a>\u00a0c\u1ed1t l\u00f5i \u0111\u00e1nh gi\u00e1 kh\u1ea3 n\u0103ng t\u1ed5 ch\u1ee9c v\u00e0 li\u00ean k\u1ebft c\u00e1c \u00fd t\u01b0\u1edfng trong b\u00e0i vi\u1ebft c\u1ee7a b\u1ea1n. \u0110\u1ec3 \u0111\u1ea1t \u0111i\u1ec3m cao v\u1edbi ti\u00eau ch\u00ed n\u00e0y, b\u00e0i vi\u1ebft c\u1ee7a b\u1ea1n c\u1ea7n ph\u1ea3i r\u00f5 r\u00e0ng v\u00e0 m\u1ea1ch l\u1ea1c, v\u1edbi n\u1ed9i dung \u0111\u01b0\u1ee3c s\u1eafp x\u1ebfp m\u1ed9t c\u00e1ch h\u1ee3p l\u00fd v\u00e0 d\u1ec5 hi\u1ec3u.<\/p>\n<figure id=\"attachment_27439\" aria-describedby=\"caption-attachment-27439\" style=\"width: 870px\" class=\"wp-caption aligncenter\"><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"size-full wp-image-27439\" src=\"https:\/\/etest.edu.vn\/wp-content\/uploads\/2024\/09\/coherence-and-cohesion-2.jpg\" alt=\"coherence and cohesion\" width=\"870\" height=\"570\" srcset=\"https:\/\/etest.edu.vn\/wp-content\/uploads\/2024\/09\/coherence-and-cohesion-2.jpg 870w, https:\/\/etest.edu.vn\/wp-content\/uploads\/2024\/09\/coherence-and-cohesion-2-611x400.jpg 611w, https:\/\/etest.edu.vn\/wp-content\/uploads\/2024\/09\/coherence-and-cohesion-2-768x503.jpg 768w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 870px) 100vw, 870px\" \/><figcaption id=\"caption-attachment-27439\" class=\"wp-caption-text\">\u0110\u1ecbnh ngh\u0129a v\u1ec1 Coherence and Cohesion<\/figcaption><\/figure>\n<h2><strong>Coherence and Cohesion kh\u00e1c nhau nh\u01b0 th\u1ebf n\u00e0o?<\/strong><\/h2>\n<table style=\"height: 193px; width: 100%;\" border=\"1\">\n<tbody>\n<tr style=\"height: 21px;\">\n<td style=\"height: 21px;\"><strong>Criteria<\/strong><\/td>\n<td style=\"height: 21px;\"><strong>Coherence (T\u00ednh m\u1ea1ch l\u1ea1c)<\/strong><\/td>\n<td style=\"height: 21px;\"><strong>Cohesion (T\u00ednh li\u00ean k\u1ebft)<\/strong><\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<tr style=\"height: 43px;\">\n<td style=\"height: 43px;\"><strong>Define<\/strong><\/td>\n<td style=\"height: 43px;\">T\u00ednh r\u00f5 r\u00e0ng v\u00e0 logic trong c\u00e1ch t\u1ed5 ch\u1ee9c \u00fd t\u01b0\u1edfng<\/td>\n<td style=\"height: 43px;\">C\u00e1ch k\u1ebft n\u1ed1i c\u00e1c ph\u1ea7n c\u1ee7a v\u0103n b\u1ea3n b\u1eb1ng ng\u1eef ph\u00e1p v\u00e0 t\u1eeb v\u1ef1ng<\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<tr style=\"height: 43px;\">\n<td style=\"height: 43px;\"><strong>Target<\/strong><\/td>\n<td style=\"height: 43px;\">\u0110\u1ea3m b\u1ea3o \u00fd t\u01b0\u1edfng v\u00e0 th\u00f4ng tin \u0111\u01b0\u1ee3c tr\u00ecnh b\u00e0y m\u1ed9t c\u00e1ch h\u1ee3p l\u00fd<\/td>\n<td style=\"height: 43px;\">\u0110\u1ea3m b\u1ea3o c\u00e1c c\u00e2u v\u00e0 \u0111o\u1ea1n v\u0103n li\u00ean k\u1ebft v\u1edbi nhau m\u1ed9t c\u00e1ch m\u01b0\u1ee3t m\u00e0<\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<tr style=\"height: 43px;\">\n<td style=\"height: 43px;\"><strong>C\u00e1ch th\u1ef1c hi\u1ec7n<\/strong><\/td>\n<td style=\"height: 43px;\">S\u1eafp x\u1ebfp n\u1ed9i dung theo tr\u00ecnh t\u1ef1 h\u1ee3p l\u00fd, ph\u00e1t tri\u1ec3n \u00fd t\u01b0\u1edfng r\u00f5 r\u00e0ng<\/td>\n<td style=\"height: 43px;\">S\u1eed d\u1ee5ng t\u1eeb n\u1ed1i, \u0111\u1ea1i t\u1eeb, v\u00e0 c\u00e1c c\u1ee5m t\u1eeb li\u00ean k\u1ebft \u0111\u1ec3 k\u1ebft n\u1ed1i c\u00e2u v\u00e0 \u0111o\u1ea1n<\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<tr style=\"height: 43px;\">\n<td style=\"height: 43px;\"><strong>For example<\/strong><\/td>\n<td style=\"height: 43px;\">B\u00e0i vi\u1ebft c\u00f3 c\u1ea5u tr\u00fac r\u00f5 r\u00e0ng, v\u1edbi c\u00e1c \u0111o\u1ea1n v\u0103n t\u1eadp trung v\u00e0o m\u1ed9t ch\u1ee7 \u0111\u1ec1 ch\u00ednh<\/td>\n<td style=\"height: 43px;\">S\u1eed d\u1ee5ng t\u1eeb n\u1ed1i nh\u01b0 &#8220;h\u01a1n n\u1eefa&#8221;, &#8220;b\u1edfi v\u00ec&#8221;, &#8220;v\u00ec v\u1eady&#8221; \u0111\u1ec3 li\u00ean k\u1ebft c\u00e1c c\u00e2u<\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<\/tbody>\n<\/table>\n<h2><strong>T\u1ea7m quan tr\u1ecdng c\u1ee7a ti\u00eau ch\u00ed Coherence and Cohesion trong IELTS Writing<\/strong><\/h2>\n<ul>\n<li><strong>Th\u1ec3 hi\u1ec7n kh\u1ea3 n\u0103ng t\u1ed5 ch\u1ee9c \u00fd t\u01b0\u1edfng:\u00a0<\/strong>M\u1ed9t b\u00e0i vi\u1ebft c\u00f3 Coherence v\u00e0 Cohesion cao cho th\u1ea5y b\u1ea1n c\u00f3 kh\u1ea3 n\u0103ng s\u1eafp x\u1ebfp, ph\u00e2n t\u00edch v\u00e0 tr\u00ecnh b\u00e0y \u00fd t\u01b0\u1edfng m\u1ed9t c\u00e1ch m\u1ea1ch l\u1ea1c, logic.<\/li>\n<li><strong>T\u0103ng t\u00ednh d\u1ec5 hi\u1ec3u:<\/strong>\u00a0Khi b\u00e0i vi\u1ebft c\u00f3 t\u00ednh li\u00ean k\u1ebft cao, ng\u01b0\u1eddi \u0111\u1ecdc s\u1ebd d\u1ec5 d\u00e0ng theo d\u00f5i d\u00f2ng suy ngh\u0129 c\u1ee7a b\u1ea1n v\u00e0 hi\u1ec3u r\u00f5 \u00fd ngh\u0129a c\u1ee7a b\u00e0i vi\u1ebft.<\/li>\n<li><strong>T\u0103ng c\u01a1 h\u1ed9i \u0111\u1ea1t band \u0111i\u1ec3m cao:<\/strong>\u00a0C\u00e1c ti\u00eau ch\u00ed n\u00e0y \u1ea3nh h\u01b0\u1edfng tr\u1ef1c ti\u1ebfp \u0111\u1ebfn \u0111i\u1ec3m s\u1ed1 c\u1ee7a b\u1ea1n trong ph\u1ea7n Writing. B\u00e0i vi\u1ebft m\u1ea1ch l\u1ea1c v\u00e0 c\u00f3 t\u00ednh li\u00ean k\u1ebft cao th\u01b0\u1eddng \u0111\u01b0\u1ee3c \u0111\u00e1nh gi\u00e1 t\u1ed1t h\u01a1n v\u00ec n\u00f3 d\u1ec5 hi\u1ec3u v\u00e0 h\u1ee3p l\u00fd h\u01a1n.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p><strong>For example:<\/strong><\/p>\n<ul>\n<li><strong>C\u00e2u kh\u00f4ng c\u00f3 Coherence v\u00e0 Cohesion:<\/strong><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>I like to eat apples. Bananas are yellow. I like to play tennis.<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li><strong>C\u00e2u c\u00f3 s\u1eed d\u1ee5ng Coherence v\u00e0 Cohesion<\/strong>:<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>I like to eat fruits,<span style=\"color: #ff0000;\"> especially<\/span> apples <span style=\"color: #ff0000;\">and<\/span> bananas. Bananas are yellow and sweet. <span style=\"color: #ff0000;\">Besides<\/span> eating fruits, I also enjoy playing tennis in my free time.<\/p>\n<p>Nh\u01b0 b\u1ea1n th\u1ea5y, c\u00e2u th\u1ee9 hai s\u1eed d\u1ee5ng c\u00e1c t\u1eeb n\u1ed1i &#8220;<em>especially&#8221;, &#8220;and&#8221;, &#8220;besides&#8221;<\/em>\u00a0\u0111\u1ec3 t\u1ea1o s\u1ef1 li\u00ean k\u1ebft gi\u1eefa c\u00e1c c\u00e2u, gi\u00fap b\u00e0i vi\u1ebft tr\u1edf n\u00ean m\u1ea1ch l\u1ea1c v\u00e0 d\u1ec5 hi\u1ec3u h\u01a1n.<\/p>\n<figure id=\"attachment_27441\" aria-describedby=\"caption-attachment-27441\" style=\"width: 870px\" class=\"wp-caption aligncenter\"><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"size-full wp-image-27441\" src=\"https:\/\/etest.edu.vn\/wp-content\/uploads\/2024\/09\/coherence-and-cohesion-1.jpg\" alt=\"coherence and cohesion\" width=\"870\" height=\"570\" srcset=\"https:\/\/etest.edu.vn\/wp-content\/uploads\/2024\/09\/coherence-and-cohesion-1.jpg 870w, https:\/\/etest.edu.vn\/wp-content\/uploads\/2024\/09\/coherence-and-cohesion-1-611x400.jpg 611w, https:\/\/etest.edu.vn\/wp-content\/uploads\/2024\/09\/coherence-and-cohesion-1-768x503.jpg 768w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 870px) 100vw, 870px\" \/><figcaption id=\"caption-attachment-27441\" class=\"wp-caption-text\">S\u1eed d\u1ee5ng Coherence and Cohesion \u0111\u1ec3 t\u0103ng c\u01a1 h\u1ed9i \u0111\u1ea1t \u0111\u01b0\u1ee3c band \u0111i\u1ec3m IELTS Writing cao<\/figcaption><\/figure>\n<h2><strong>B\u00ed k\u00edp ghi \u0111i\u1ec3m Coherence and Cohesion trong IELTS Writing<\/strong><\/h2>\n<h3><strong>\u0110\u1ed1i v\u1edbi Coherence<\/strong><\/h3>\n<p>Khi kh\u1ea3 n\u0103ng vi\u1ebft c\u1ee7a b\u1ea1n c\u00f2n h\u1ea1n ch\u1ebf, h\u00e3y tr\u00e1nh vi\u1ebft qu\u00e1 d\u00e0i. Thay v\u00e0o \u0111\u00f3, h\u00e3y tr\u00ecnh b\u00e0y n\u1ed9i dung m\u1ed9t c\u00e1ch ng\u1eafn g\u1ecdn v\u00e0 x\u00fac t\u00edch, nh\u01b0ng v\u1eabn \u0111\u1ea3m b\u1ea3o \u0111\u1ea1t y\u00eau c\u1ea7u \u0111\u1ed9 d\u00e0i t\u1ed1i thi\u1ec3u c\u1ee7a \u0111\u1ec1 b\u00e0i. Vi\u1ec7c x\u00e1c \u0111\u1ecbnh tr\u01b0\u1edbc \u0111\u1ed9 d\u00e0i v\u00e0 vi\u1ebft ng\u1eafn g\u1ecdn s\u1ebd gi\u00fap b\u1ea1n \u0111\u01a1n gi\u1ea3n h\u00f3a vi\u1ec7c t\u1ed5 ch\u1ee9c th\u00f4ng tin. Ch\u1ecdn nh\u1eefng \u00fd ch\u00ednh v\u00e0 quan tr\u1ecdng nh\u1ea5t \u0111\u1ec3 x\u00e2y d\u1ef1ng n\u1ed9i dung m\u1ed9t c\u00e1ch m\u1ea1ch l\u1ea1c, r\u00f5 r\u00e0ng.<\/p>\n<p>Tr\u01b0\u1edbc khi b\u1eaft tay v\u00e0o vi\u1ebft, h\u00e3y d\u00e0nh th\u1eddi gian \u0111\u1ec3 \u0111\u1ecbnh h\u01b0\u1edbng b\u00e0i vi\u1ebft v\u00e0 l\u1eadp d\u00e0n \u00fd t\u1ed5ng qu\u00e1t. S\u1eafp x\u1ebfp c\u00e1c \u00fd theo tr\u00ecnh t\u1ef1 logic s\u1ebd gi\u00fap b\u1ea1n tr\u00ecnh b\u00e0y, gi\u1ea3i th\u00edch, v\u00e0 \u0111\u01b0a d\u1eabn ch\u1ee9ng v\u1ec1 t\u1eebng \u00fd m\u1ed9t c\u00e1ch d\u1ec5 d\u00e0ng. Khi m\u1ecdi th\u1ee9 \u0111\u00e3 \u0111\u01b0\u1ee3c v\u1ea1ch s\u1eb5n, b\u1ea1n s\u1ebd kh\u00f4ng b\u1ecb l\u1ea1c \u0111\u1ec1 v\u00e0 b\u00e0i vi\u1ebft c\u1ee7a b\u1ea1n s\u1ebd tr\u1edf n\u00ean m\u1ea1ch l\u1ea1c h\u01a1n.<\/p>\n<p>X\u00e1c \u0111\u1ecbnh t\u1eeb kh\u00f3a ch\u00ednh cho b\u00e0i vi\u1ebft v\u00e0 l\u1eb7p l\u1ea1i ch\u00fang \u1edf nh\u1eefng v\u1ecb tr\u00ed th\u00edch h\u1ee3p \u0111\u1ec3 gi\u1eef cho b\u00e0i vi\u1ebft c\u00f3 s\u1ef1 li\u00ean k\u1ebft. \u0110\u1ed3ng th\u1eddi, h\u00e3y s\u1eed d\u1ee5ng c\u00e1c t\u1eeb \u0111\u1ed3ng ngh\u0129a thay th\u1ebf \u0111\u1ec3 tr\u00e1nh l\u1eb7p t\u1eeb qu\u00e1 nhi\u1ec1u, \u0111i\u1ec1u n\u00e0y gi\u00fap b\u00e0i vi\u1ebft c\u1ee7a b\u1ea1n tr\u1edf n\u00ean \u0111a d\u1ea1ng v\u00e0 phong ph\u00fa h\u01a1n.<\/p>\n<p>Tuy nhi\u00ean, c\u1ea7n ki\u1ec3m so\u00e1t t\u1ea7n su\u1ea5t l\u1eb7p l\u1ea1i t\u1eeb kh\u00f3a \u0111\u1ec3 tr\u00e1nh g\u00e2y kh\u00f3 hi\u1ec3u cho ng\u01b0\u1eddi \u0111\u1ecdc. \u00c1p d\u1ee5ng nh\u1eefng b\u00ed k\u00edp n\u00e0y s\u1ebd gi\u00fap b\u1ea1n c\u1ea3i thi\u1ec7n \u0111\u00e1ng k\u1ec3 \u0111i\u1ec3m s\u1ed1 trong\u00a0<strong>ti\u00eau ch\u00ed Coherence<\/strong>\u00a0c\u1ee7a b\u00e0i vi\u1ebft IELTS.<\/p>\n<h3><strong>\u0110\u1ed1i v\u1edbi Cohesion<\/strong><\/h3>\n<p>\u0110\u1ec3 \u0111\u1ea1t \u0111i\u1ec3m cao trong ti\u00eau ch\u00ed Cohesion c\u1ee7a b\u00e0i vi\u1ebft IELTS, vi\u1ec7c s\u1eed d\u1ee5ng hi\u1ec7u qu\u1ea3 c\u00e1c t\u1eeb n\u1ed1i v\u00e0 t\u1eeb chuy\u1ec3n ti\u1ebfp l\u00e0 r\u1ea5t quan tr\u1ecdng.<\/p>\n<p>V\u00ed d\u1ee5, \u0111\u1ec3 di\u1ec5n t\u1ea3 s\u1ef1 t\u01b0\u01a1ng ph\u1ea3n, b\u1ea1n c\u00f3 th\u1ec3 s\u1eed d\u1ee5ng\u00a0<em>\u201chowever\u201d<\/em>\u00a0or\u00a0<em>\u201con the other hand\u201d.<\/em>\u00a0\u0110\u1ec3 n\u1ed1i c\u00e1c \u00fd li\u00ean ti\u1ebfp, c\u00e1c t\u1eeb nh\u01b0 \u201c<em>furthermore,\u201d \u201cin addition,\u201d<\/em>\u00a0and\u00a0<em>\u201cmoreover\u201d<\/em>\u00a0r\u1ea5t h\u1eefu \u00edch. S\u1eed d\u1ee5ng c\u00e1c t\u1eeb n\u00e0y m\u1ed9t c\u00e1ch ch\u00ednh x\u00e1c s\u1ebd gi\u00fap b\u00e0i vi\u1ebft c\u1ee7a b\u1ea1n tr\u1edf n\u00ean li\u1ec1n m\u1ea1ch v\u00e0 d\u1ec5 hi\u1ec3u h\u01a1n.<\/p>\n<p>\u0110\u1ecdc c\u00e1c b\u00e0i m\u1eabu tr\u00ean\u00a0<a href=\"https:\/\/etest.edu.vn\/en\/web-hoc-tieng-anh-mien-phi\/\">c\u00e1c trang web ti\u1ebfng Anh uy t\u00edn<\/a>\u00a0kh\u00f4ng ch\u1ec9 gi\u00fap b\u1ea1n l\u00e0m quen v\u1edbi c\u00e1ch di\u1ec5n \u0111\u1ea1t logic m\u00e0 c\u00f2n cung c\u1ea5p cho b\u1ea1n nhi\u1ec1u v\u00ed d\u1ee5 v\u1ec1 vi\u1ec7c s\u1eed d\u1ee5ng t\u1eeb li\u00ean k\u1ebft. Khi b\u1ea1n quan s\u00e1t c\u00e1ch c\u00e1c b\u00e0i vi\u1ebft n\u00e0y t\u1ed5 ch\u1ee9c v\u00e0 k\u1ebft n\u1ed1i th\u00f4ng tin, b\u1ea1n s\u1ebd h\u1ecdc \u0111\u01b0\u1ee3c c\u00e1ch \u00e1p d\u1ee5ng t\u1eeb n\u1ed1i v\u00e0 t\u1eeb chuy\u1ec3n ti\u1ebfp m\u1ed9t c\u00e1ch t\u1ef1 nhi\u00ean v\u00e0 hi\u1ec7u qu\u1ea3. \u00c1p d\u1ee5ng nh\u1eefng b\u00ed k\u00edp n\u00e0y s\u1ebd gi\u00fap b\u1ea1n n\u00e2ng cao \u0111i\u1ec3m s\u1ed1 trong\u00a0<strong>ti\u00eau ch\u00ed Cohesion<\/strong>\u00a0c\u1ee7a b\u00e0i vi\u1ebft IELTS.<\/p>\n<p><strong>Coherence and cohesion<\/strong>\u00a0kh\u00f4ng ch\u1ec9 l\u00e0 nh\u1eefng y\u1ebfu t\u1ed1 c\u01a1 b\u1ea3n trong b\u00e0i vi\u1ebft IELTS, m\u00e0 c\u00f2n l\u00e0 ch\u00eca kh\u00f3a \u0111\u1ec3 b\u1ea1n ghi \u0111i\u1ec3m cao v\u00e0 n\u1ed5i b\u1eadt trong m\u1eaft gi\u00e1m kh\u1ea3o. Vi\u1ec7c hi\u1ec3u v\u00e0 \u00e1p d\u1ee5ng \u0111\u00fang nh\u1eefng nguy\u00ean t\u1eafc n\u00e0y s\u1ebd gi\u00fap b\u1ea1n vi\u1ebft m\u1ed9t b\u00e0i lu\u1eadn ch\u1eb7t ch\u1ebd, m\u1ea1ch l\u1ea1c v\u00e0 d\u1ec5 hi\u1ec3u. H\u00e3y \u0111\u1ea7u t\u01b0 th\u1eddi gian luy\u1ec7n t\u1eadp v\u00e0 c\u1ea3i thi\u1ec7n k\u1ef9 n\u0103ng vi\u1ebft c\u1ee7a m\u00ecnh \u0111\u1ec3 \u0111\u1ea1t \u0111\u01b0\u1ee3c k\u1ebft qu\u1ea3 t\u1ed1t nh\u1ea5t trong k\u1ef3 thi\u00a0<a href=\"https:\/\/etest.edu.vn\/en\/ielts-la-gi\/\">IELTS<\/a>.<\/p>\n<p>N\u1ebfu b\u1ea1n \u0111ang t\u00ecm ki\u1ebfm s\u1ef1 h\u1ed7 tr\u1ee3 chuy\u00ean nghi\u1ec7p \u0111\u1ec3 n\u00e2ng cao \u0111i\u1ec3m s\u1ed1 IELTS c\u1ee7a m\u00ecnh,\u00a0<a href=\"https:\/\/etest.edu.vn\/en\/\"><strong>ETEST English for Study Abroad<\/strong><\/a>\u00a0s\u1eb5n s\u00e0ng \u0111\u1ed3ng h\u00e0nh c\u00f9ng b\u1ea1n. V\u1edbi c\u00e1c kh\u00f3a h\u1ecdc\u00a0<a href=\"https:\/\/etest.edu.vn\/en\/khoa-hoc\/luyen-thi-ielts\/\"><strong>IELTS test preparation<\/strong><\/a>\u00a0and\u00a0<a href=\"https:\/\/etest.edu.vn\/en\/khoa-hoc\/luyen-thi-ielts-1-kem-1\/\"><strong>IELTS 1 on 1<\/strong><\/a>, ch\u00fang t\u00f4i cung c\u1ea5p ch\u01b0\u01a1ng tr\u00ecnh\u00a0<a href=\"https:\/\/etest.edu.vn\/en\/tu-hoc-ielts\/\"><strong>learn IELTS<\/strong><\/a>,\u00a0<a href=\"https:\/\/etest.edu.vn\/en\/khoa-hoc\/luyen-thi-ielts-cap-toc\/\"><strong>IELTS crash course<\/strong><\/a>, gi\u00fap b\u1ea1n \u0111\u1ea1t \u0111\u01b0\u1ee3c m\u1ee5c ti\u00eau c\u1ee7a m\u00ecnh m\u1ed9t c\u00e1ch hi\u1ec7u qu\u1ea3 v\u00e0 nhanh ch\u00f3ng.<\/p>\n<p>H\u00e3y li\u00ean h\u1ec7 v\u1edbi Anh Ng\u1eef Du H\u1ecdc ETEST ngay h\u00f4m nay \u0111\u1ec3 \u0111\u01b0\u1ee3c t\u01b0 v\u1ea5n v\u00e0 b\u1eaft \u0111\u1ea7u h\u00e0nh tr\u00ecnh chinh ph\u1ee5c IELTS c\u1ee7a b\u1ea1n!<\/p>\n<p>Learn more about how to improve your IELTS Writing scoring criteria:<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li><strong><a href=\"https:\/\/etest.edu.vn\/en\/lexical-resource\/\">Lexical Resource<\/a><\/strong><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<ul>\n<li><a href=\"https:\/\/etest.edu.vn\/en\/grammatical-range-and-accuracy\/\"><strong>Grammatical Range and Accuracy<\/strong><\/a><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<ul>\n<li><a href=\"https:\/\/etest.edu.vn\/en\/task-achievement\/\"><strong>Task Achievement<\/strong><\/a><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n\n\n<div class=\"kk-star-ratings kksr-auto kksr-align-left kksr-valign-bottom\"\n    data-payload='{&quot;align&quot;:&quot;left&quot;,&quot;id&quot;:&quot;27436&quot;,&quot;slug&quot;:&quot;default&quot;,&quot;valign&quot;:&quot;bottom&quot;,&quot;ignore&quot;:&quot;&quot;,&quot;reference&quot;:&quot;auto&quot;,&quot;class&quot;:&quot;&quot;,&quot;count&quot;:&quot;0&quot;,&quot;legendonly&quot;:&quot;&quot;,&quot;readonly&quot;:&quot;&quot;,&quot;score&quot;:&quot;0&quot;,&quot;starsonly&quot;:&quot;&quot;,&quot;best&quot;:&quot;5&quot;,&quot;gap&quot;:&quot;5&quot;,&quot;greet&quot;:&quot;\u0110\u00e1nh gi\u00e1 b\u00e0i vi\u1ebft&quot;,&quot;legend&quot;:&quot;0\\\/5 - (0 votes)&quot;,&quot;size&quot;:&quot;24&quot;,&quot;title&quot;:&quot;Coherence and Cohesion l\u00e0 g\u00ec? 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