{"id":28443,"date":"2024-12-31T15:22:05","date_gmt":"2024-12-31T08:22:05","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/etest.edu.vn\/?p=28443"},"modified":"2024-12-31T15:26:16","modified_gmt":"2024-12-31T08:26:16","slug":"writing-task-1-pie-chart","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/etest.edu.vn\/en\/writing-task-1-pie-chart\/","title":{"rendered":"C\u00e1ch vi\u1ebft Writing Task 1 Pie Chart (Bi\u1ec3u \u0111\u1ed3 tr\u00f2n) c\u1ee5 th\u1ec3, \u0111\u01a1n gi\u1ea3n"},"content":{"rendered":"

Bi\u1ec3u \u0111\u1ed3 tr\u00f2n (Pie Chart) l\u00e0 m\u1ed9t trong nh\u1eefng d\u1ea1ng b\u00e0i th\u01b0\u1eddng g\u1eb7p trong ph\u1ea7n\u00a0IELTS Writing Task 1<\/strong><\/a>, \u0111\u00f2i h\u1ecfi ng\u01b0\u1eddi thi ph\u1ea3i ph\u00e2n t\u00edch v\u00e0 tr\u00ecnh b\u00e0y d\u1eef li\u1ec7u m\u1ed9t c\u00e1ch r\u00f5 r\u00e0ng, m\u1ea1ch l\u1ea1c. V\u1edbi vai tr\u00f2 th\u1ec3 hi\u1ec7n t\u1ef7 l\u1ec7 v\u00e0 s\u1ef1 ph\u00e2n b\u1ed5, d\u1ea1ng b\u00e0i n\u00e0y kh\u00f4ng ch\u1ec9 ki\u1ec3m tra kh\u1ea3 n\u0103ng s\u1eed d\u1ee5ng t\u1eeb v\u1ef1ng h\u1ecdc thu\u1eadt m\u00e0 c\u00f2n \u0111\u00e1nh gi\u00e1 k\u1ef9 n\u0103ng so s\u00e1nh, nh\u1eadn x\u00e9t xu h\u01b0\u1edbng.<\/p>\n

ETEST English for Study Abroad<\/strong><\/a>\u00a0h\u01b0\u1edbng d\u1eabn t\u1eebng b\u01b0\u1edbc \u0111\u1ec3 l\u00e0m b\u00e0i\u00a0Writing Task 1 Pie Chart<\/strong><\/a>\u00a0hi\u1ec7u qu\u1ea3, t\u1eeb c\u00e1ch ph\u00e2n t\u00edch d\u1eef li\u1ec7u, vi\u1ebft t\u1ed5ng quan (Overview), \u0111\u1ebfn c\u00e1ch tri\u1ec3n khai t\u1eebng \u0111o\u1ea1n n\u1ed9i dung chi ti\u1ebft.<\/p>\n

M\u1ed9t s\u1ed1 d\u1ea1ng bi\u1ec3u \u0111\u1ed3 Pie Chart trong ph\u1ea7n IELTS Writing Task 1<\/strong><\/h2>\n

Bi\u1ec3u \u0111\u1ed3 Pie Chart<\/strong>\u00a0l\u00e0 bi\u1ec3u \u0111\u1ed3 h\u00ecnh tr\u00f2n, \u0111\u01b0\u1ee3c chia th\u00e0nh nhi\u1ec1u ph\u1ea7n nh\u1ecf c\u00f3 m\u00e0u s\u1eafc ho\u1eb7c k\u00fd hi\u1ec7u kh\u00e1c nhau \u0111\u1ec3 \u0111\u1ea1i di\u1ec7n cho c\u00e1c y\u1ebfu t\u1ed1 c\u1ea7n so s\u00e1nh. M\u1ed7i ph\u1ea7n trong bi\u1ec3u \u0111\u1ed3 s\u1ebd bi\u1ec3u th\u1ecb m\u1ed9t \u0111\u1ed1i t\u01b0\u1ee3ng c\u1ee5 th\u1ec3, th\u01b0\u1eddng \u0111\u01b0\u1ee3c tr\u00ecnh b\u00e0y d\u01b0\u1edbi d\u1ea1ng s\u1ed1 li\u1ec7u ph\u1ea7n tr\u0103m, gi\u00fap ng\u01b0\u1eddi xem d\u1ec5 d\u00e0ng nh\u1eadn di\u1ec7n t\u1ef7 l\u1ec7 c\u1ee7a t\u1eebng ph\u1ea7n trong t\u1ed5ng th\u1ec3.<\/p>\n

Bi\u1ec3u \u0111\u1ed3 Pie Chart c\u00f3 th\u1ec3 \u0111\u01b0\u1ee3c ph\u00e2n th\u00e0nh hai d\u1ea1ng ch\u00ednh. \u0110\u1ea7u ti\u00ean l\u00e0 d\u1ea1ng\u00a0bi\u1ec3u \u0111\u1ed3 bi\u1ebfn \u0111\u1ed9ng (dynamic chart)<\/strong>, d\u00f9ng \u0111\u1ec3 th\u1ec3 hi\u1ec7n s\u1ef1 thay \u0111\u1ed5i c\u1ee7a c\u00e1c y\u1ebfu t\u1ed1 theo th\u1eddi gian. M\u1ed7i bi\u1ec3u \u0111\u1ed3 trong d\u1ea1ng n\u00e0y th\u01b0\u1eddng \u0111\u1ea1i di\u1ec7n cho m\u1ed9t m\u1ed1c th\u1eddi gian c\u1ee5 th\u1ec3, nh\u01b0 m\u1ed9t n\u0103m ho\u1eb7c th\u00e1ng, v\u00e0 c\u00f3 th\u1ec3 xu\u1ea5t hi\u1ec7n nhi\u1ec1u bi\u1ec3u \u0111\u1ed3 \u0111\u1ec3 so s\u00e1nh s\u1ef1 thay \u0111\u1ed5i qua c\u00e1c giai \u0111o\u1ea1n kh\u00e1c nhau.<\/p>\n

D\u1ea1ng th\u1ee9 hai l\u00e0\u00a0bi\u1ec3u \u0111\u1ed3 t\u0129nh (static chart)<\/strong>, d\u00f9ng \u0111\u1ec3 so s\u00e1nh c\u00e1c y\u1ebfu t\u1ed1 t\u1ea1i m\u1ed9t th\u1eddi \u0111i\u1ec3m duy nh\u1ea5t, ch\u1eb3ng h\u1ea1n nh\u01b0 t\u1ef7 l\u1ec7 ph\u00e2n b\u1ed5 chi ti\u00eau c\u1ee7a m\u1ed9t qu\u1ed1c gia ho\u1eb7c s\u1ef1 ph\u00e2n chia d\u00e2n s\u1ed1 theo gi\u1edbi t\u00ednh. Bi\u1ec3u \u0111\u1ed3 n\u00e0y ch\u1ec9 c\u00f3 m\u1ed9t bi\u1ec3u \u0111\u1ed3 tr\u00f2n duy nh\u1ea5t v\u00e0 kh\u00f4ng so s\u00e1nh c\u00e1c m\u1ed1c th\u1eddi gian kh\u00e1c nhau.<\/p>\n

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C\u00f3 hai d\u1ea1ng bi\u1ec3u \u0111\u1ed3 Pie Chart trong IELTS Writing Task 1<\/figcaption><\/figure>\n

C\u00e1ch vi\u1ebft Writing Task 1 Pie Chart (Bi\u1ec3u \u0111\u1ed3 tr\u00f2n) c\u1ee5 th\u1ec3<\/strong><\/h2>\n

D\u1ea1ng bi\u1ec3u \u0111\u1ed3 bi\u1ebfn \u0111\u1ed9ng<\/strong><\/h3>\n

Khi g\u1eb7p d\u1ea1ng bi\u1ec3u \u0111\u1ed3 Pie Chart bi\u1ebfn \u0111\u1ed9ng (dynamic chart) trong IELTS Writing Task 1, nhi\u1ec7m v\u1ee5 c\u1ee7a b\u1ea1n l\u00e0 m\u00f4 t\u1ea3 s\u1ef1 thay \u0111\u1ed5i c\u1ee7a c\u00e1c y\u1ebfu t\u1ed1 qua c\u00e1c m\u1ed1c th\u1eddi gian kh\u00e1c nhau. D\u01b0\u1edbi \u0111\u00e2y l\u00e0 c\u00e1ch vi\u1ebft chi ti\u1ebft cho bi\u1ec3u \u0111\u1ed3 n\u00e0y:<\/p>\n

Gi\u1edbi thi\u1ec7u bi\u1ec3u \u0111\u1ed3<\/strong>:<\/p>\n

B\u1eaft \u0111\u1ea7u b\u1eb1ng c\u00e1ch gi\u1edbi thi\u1ec7u bi\u1ec3u \u0111\u1ed3, n\u00eau r\u00f5 v\u1ec1 c\u00e1c y\u1ebfu t\u1ed1 \u0111\u01b0\u1ee3c so s\u00e1nh v\u00e0 th\u1eddi gian m\u00e0 bi\u1ec3u \u0111\u1ed3 tr\u00ecnh b\u00e0y. V\u00ed d\u1ee5:<\/p>\n

The pie chart illustrates the percentage distribution of various expenditures of a family in the year 2020 and 2025.<\/em><\/p>\n

(Bi\u1ec3u \u0111\u1ed3 h\u00ecnh tr\u00f2n minh h\u1ecda s\u1ef1 ph\u00e2n b\u1ed1 t\u1ef7 l\u1ec7 ph\u1ea7n tr\u0103m c\u1ee7a c\u00e1c kho\u1ea3n chi ti\u00eau kh\u00e1c nhau c\u1ee7a m\u1ed9t gia \u0111\u00ecnh v\u00e0o c\u00e1c n\u0103m 2020 v\u00e0 2025.)<\/p>\n

M\u00f4 t\u1ea3 t\u1ed5ng quan<\/strong>:
\nTrong ph\u1ea7n n\u00e0y, b\u1ea1n n\u00ean n\u00eau ra c\u00e1c \u0111\u1eb7c \u0111i\u1ec3m n\u1ed5i b\u1eadt c\u1ee7a bi\u1ec3u \u0111\u1ed3, ch\u1eb3ng h\u1ea1n nh\u01b0 s\u1ef1 thay \u0111\u1ed5i l\u1edbn nh\u1ea5t gi\u1eefa c\u00e1c m\u1ed1c th\u1eddi gian, ho\u1eb7c s\u1ef1 kh\u00e1c bi\u1ec7t r\u00f5 r\u00e0ng gi\u1eefa c\u00e1c y\u1ebfu t\u1ed1. H\u00e3y tr\u00e1nh \u0111i v\u00e0o chi ti\u1ebft qu\u00e1 s\u1edbm v\u00e0 ch\u1ec9 n\u00ean tr\u00ecnh b\u00e0y th\u00f4ng tin chung v\u1ec1 xu h\u01b0\u1edbng thay \u0111\u1ed5i. V\u00ed d\u1ee5:
\nOverall, it can be seen that the proportion of spending on housing significantly increased in 2025, while the expenditure on entertainment decreased during the same period.<\/em>
\n<\/em>(Nh\u00ecn chung, c\u00f3 th\u1ec3 th\u1ea5y r\u1eb1ng t\u1ef7 l\u1ec7 chi ti\u00eau cho nh\u00e0 \u1edf \u0111\u00e3 t\u0103ng \u0111\u00e1ng k\u1ec3 v\u00e0o n\u0103m 2025, trong khi chi ti\u00eau cho gi\u1ea3i tr\u00ed gi\u1ea3m trong c\u00f9ng th\u1eddi k\u1ef3 \u0111\u00f3.)<\/p>\n

M\u00f4 t\u1ea3 chi ti\u1ebft s\u1ef1 thay \u0111\u1ed5i<\/strong>:
\nTi\u1ebfp theo, b\u1ea1n n\u00ean m\u00f4 t\u1ea3 chi ti\u1ebft v\u1ec1 s\u1ef1 thay \u0111\u1ed5i c\u1ee7a t\u1eebng y\u1ebfu t\u1ed1 qua c\u00e1c m\u1ed1c th\u1eddi gian. B\u1ea1n c\u1ea7n so s\u00e1nh c\u00e1c ph\u1ea7n trong bi\u1ec3u \u0111\u1ed3 v\u00e0 ch\u1ec9 ra s\u1ef1 thay \u0111\u1ed5i v\u1ec1 t\u1ef7 l\u1ec7 ph\u1ea7n tr\u0103m c\u1ee7a t\u1eebng y\u1ebfu t\u1ed1 qua c\u00e1c n\u0103m. V\u00ed d\u1ee5:
\nIn 2020, housing accounted for 30% of the total expenditure, but by 2025, this figure had risen to 40%. Meanwhile, the proportion spent on entertainment dropped from 20% to just 10%.<\/em>
\n<\/em>(V\u00e0o n\u0103m 2020, chi ti\u00eau cho nh\u00e0 \u1edf chi\u1ebfm 30% t\u1ed5ng chi ti\u00eau, nh\u01b0ng \u0111\u1ebfn n\u0103m 2025, con s\u1ed1 n\u00e0y \u0111\u00e3 t\u0103ng l\u00ean 40%. Trong khi \u0111\u00f3, t\u1ef7 l\u1ec7 chi cho gi\u1ea3i tr\u00ed gi\u1ea3m t\u1eeb 20% xu\u1ed1ng ch\u1ec9 c\u00f2n 10%.)<\/p>\n

K\u1ebft lu\u1eadn (n\u1ebfu c\u1ea7n)<\/strong>:
\nK\u1ebft lu\u1eadn trong d\u1ea1ng b\u00e0i n\u00e0y kh\u00f4ng ph\u1ea3i l\u00fac n\u00e0o c\u0169ng c\u1ea7n thi\u1ebft, nh\u01b0ng n\u1ebfu c\u00f3 th\u1ec3, b\u1ea1n c\u00f3 th\u1ec3 nh\u1ea5n m\u1ea1nh m\u1ed9t s\u1ed1 xu h\u01b0\u1edbng ch\u00ednh ho\u1eb7c k\u1ebft lu\u1eadn chung v\u1ec1 s\u1ef1 bi\u1ebfn \u0111\u1ed9ng. V\u00ed d\u1ee5:
\nIn conclusion, the family shifted a larger share of their budget towards housing and reduced spending on entertainment.<\/em>
\n<\/em>(T\u00f3m l\u1ea1i, gia \u0111\u00ecnh \u0111\u00e3 chuy\u1ec3n m\u1ed9t ph\u1ea7n l\u1edbn ng\u00e2n s\u00e1ch c\u1ee7a m\u00ecnh v\u00e0o vi\u1ec7c chi ti\u00eau cho nh\u00e0 \u1edf v\u00e0 gi\u1ea3m chi ti\u00eau cho gi\u1ea3i tr\u00ed.)<\/p>\n

D\u1ea1ng bi\u1ec3u \u0111\u1ed3 t\u0129nh<\/strong><\/h3>\n

\u0110\u1ed1i v\u1edbi d\u1ea1ng bi\u1ec3u \u0111\u1ed3 t\u0129nh (static chart), c\u00f4ng vi\u1ec7c c\u1ee7a b\u1ea1n l\u00e0 m\u00f4 t\u1ea3 t\u1ef7 l\u1ec7 ph\u1ea7n tr\u0103m c\u1ee7a c\u00e1c y\u1ebfu t\u1ed1 t\u1ea1i m\u1ed9t th\u1eddi \u0111i\u1ec3m duy nh\u1ea5t. M\u1ed7i bi\u1ec3u \u0111\u1ed3 ch\u1ec9 \u0111\u1ea1i di\u1ec7n cho m\u1ed9t m\u1ed1c th\u1eddi gian, v\u00ec v\u1eady vi\u1ec7c ph\u00e2n t\u00edch s\u1ebd d\u1ec5 d\u00e0ng h\u01a1n so v\u1edbi d\u1ea1ng bi\u1ebfn \u0111\u1ed9ng.<\/p>\n

Gi\u1edbi thi\u1ec7u bi\u1ec3u \u0111\u1ed3<\/strong>:
\nB\u1ea1n c\u1ea7n m\u00f4 t\u1ea3 ng\u1eafn g\u1ecdn c\u00e1c y\u1ebfu t\u1ed1 trong bi\u1ec3u \u0111\u1ed3, kh\u00f4ng c\u1ea7n nh\u1eafc \u0111\u1ebfn th\u1eddi gian v\u00ec \u0111\u00e2y l\u00e0 m\u1ed9t bi\u1ec3u \u0111\u1ed3 t\u0129nh. V\u00ed d\u1ee5:
\nThe pie chart shows the distribution of different types of energy consumption in the United States.<\/em>
\n<\/em>(Bi\u1ec3u \u0111\u1ed3 h\u00ecnh tr\u00f2n th\u1ec3 hi\u1ec7n s\u1ef1 ph\u00e2n b\u1ed1 c\u00e1c lo\u1ea1i n\u0103ng l\u01b0\u1ee3ng ti\u00eau th\u1ee5 kh\u00e1c nhau t\u1ea1i Hoa K\u1ef3.)<\/p>\n

M\u00f4 t\u1ea3 t\u1ed5ng quan<\/strong>:
\nN\u00eau ra nh\u1eefng \u0111\u1eb7c \u0111i\u1ec3m ch\u00ednh trong bi\u1ec3u \u0111\u1ed3, ch\u1eb3ng h\u1ea1n nh\u01b0 y\u1ebfu t\u1ed1 n\u00e0o chi\u1ebfm t\u1ef7 l\u1ec7 cao nh\u1ea5t v\u00e0 y\u1ebfu t\u1ed1 n\u00e0o chi\u1ebfm t\u1ef7 l\u1ec7 th\u1ea5p nh\u1ea5t. V\u00ed d\u1ee5:
\nIt is clear that the largest share of energy consumption is used for transportation, while the smallest proportion is for residential use.<\/em>
\n<\/em>(R\u00f5 r\u00e0ng l\u00e0 ph\u1ea7n l\u1edbn n\u0103ng l\u01b0\u1ee3ng ti\u00eau th\u1ee5 \u0111\u01b0\u1ee3c s\u1eed d\u1ee5ng cho giao th\u00f4ng, trong khi ph\u1ea7n nh\u1ecf nh\u1ea5t l\u00e0 cho m\u1ee5c \u0111\u00edch s\u1eed d\u1ee5ng t\u1ea1i h\u1ed9 gia \u0111\u00ecnh.)<\/p>\n

Detailed description<\/strong>:
\nM\u00f4 t\u1ea3 c\u00e1c ph\u1ea7n trong bi\u1ec3u \u0111\u1ed3 m\u1ed9t c\u00e1ch c\u1ee5 th\u1ec3. B\u1ea1n c\u1ea7n ch\u1ec9 ra t\u1ef7 l\u1ec7 ph\u1ea7n tr\u0103m c\u1ee7a t\u1eebng y\u1ebfu t\u1ed1 v\u00e0 so s\u00e1nh ch\u00fang v\u1edbi nhau. V\u00ed d\u1ee5:
\nTransportation accounts for 40% of energy consumption, followed by industry with 30%, and residential use with 15%. The remaining 15% is used for other purposes.<\/em>
\n<\/em>(Giao th\u00f4ng chi\u1ebfm 40% n\u0103ng l\u01b0\u1ee3ng ti\u00eau th\u1ee5, ti\u1ebfp theo l\u00e0 c\u00f4ng nghi\u1ec7p v\u1edbi 30%, v\u00e0 s\u1eed d\u1ee5ng t\u1ea1i h\u1ed9 gia \u0111\u00ecnh v\u1edbi 15%. 15% c\u00f2n l\u1ea1i \u0111\u01b0\u1ee3c s\u1eed d\u1ee5ng cho c\u00e1c m\u1ee5c \u0111\u00edch kh\u00e1c.)<\/p>\n

K\u1ebft lu\u1eadn (n\u1ebfu c\u1ea7n)<\/strong>:
\nTrong tr\u01b0\u1eddng h\u1ee3p bi\u1ec3u \u0111\u1ed3 t\u0129nh, b\u1ea1n c\u00f3 th\u1ec3 \u0111\u01b0a ra m\u1ed9t k\u1ebft lu\u1eadn ng\u1eafn g\u1ecdn \u0111\u1ec3 l\u00e0m n\u1ed5i b\u1eadt s\u1ef1 ph\u00e2n b\u1ed1 ho\u1eb7c c\u00e1c y\u1ebfu t\u1ed1 quan tr\u1ecdng. V\u00ed d\u1ee5:
\nIn summary, transportation and industry are the two biggest contributors to energy consumption, while residential use is the least significant.<\/em>
\n<\/em>(T\u00f3m l\u1ea1i, giao th\u00f4ng v\u00e0 c\u00f4ng nghi\u1ec7p l\u00e0 hai y\u1ebfu t\u1ed1 \u0111\u00f3ng g\u00f3p l\u1edbn nh\u1ea5t v\u00e0o vi\u1ec7c ti\u00eau th\u1ee5 n\u0103ng l\u01b0\u1ee3ng, trong khi s\u1eed d\u1ee5ng t\u1ea1i h\u1ed9 gia \u0111\u00ecnh l\u00e0 y\u1ebfu t\u1ed1 \u00edt quan tr\u1ecdng nh\u1ea5t.)<\/p>\n

C\u1ea5u tr\u00fac v\u00e0 t\u1eeb v\u1ef1ng \u201c\u0103n \u0111i\u1ec3m\u201d trong d\u1ea1ng b\u00e0i Pie Chart<\/strong><\/h2>\n

T\u1eeb v\u1ef1ng m\u00f4 t\u1ea3 b\u1ed1 c\u1ee5c\u00a0<\/strong><\/h3>\n

Khi l\u00e0m b\u00e0i\u00a0IELTS Writing Task 1 d\u1ea1ng Pie Chart<\/strong>, s\u1eed d\u1ee5ng t\u1eeb v\u1ef1ng ch\u00ednh x\u00e1c v\u00e0 linh ho\u1ea1t l\u00e0 y\u1ebfu t\u1ed1 quan tr\u1ecdng gi\u00fap b\u1ea1n \u0111\u1ea1t \u0111i\u1ec3m cao. D\u01b0\u1edbi \u0111\u00e2y l\u00e0 m\u1ed9t s\u1ed1 t\u1eeb v\u1ef1ng c\u00f3 th\u1ec3 gi\u00fap b\u1ea1n m\u00f4 t\u1ea3 b\u1ed1 c\u1ee5c c\u1ee7a bi\u1ec3u \u0111\u1ed3 m\u1ed9t c\u00e1ch hi\u1ec7u qu\u1ea3:<\/p>\n