{"id":33527,"date":"2026-09-07T17:00:14","date_gmt":"2026-09-07T10:00:14","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/etest.edu.vn\/?p=33527"},"modified":"2026-09-07T17:00:14","modified_gmt":"2026-09-07T10:00:14","slug":"cach-phat-trien-y-cho-ielts-writing-ma-khong-hoc-thuoc-bai-mau","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/etest.edu.vn\/en\/cach-phat-trien-y-cho-ielts-writing-ma-khong-hoc-thuoc-bai-mau\/","title":{"rendered":"C\u00e1ch ph\u00e1t tri\u1ec3n \u00fd cho IELTS Writing m\u00e0 kh\u00f4ng h\u1ecdc thu\u1ed9c b\u00e0i m\u1eabu"},"content":{"rendered":"

Nhi\u1ec1u h\u1ecdc sinh tin r\u1eb1ng mu\u1ed1n \u0111\u1ea1t <\/span>IELTS Writing 7.0<\/span><\/a> th\u00ec ph\u1ea3i h\u1ecdc th\u1eadt nhi\u1ec1u b\u00e0i m\u1eabu. Th\u1ef1c t\u1ebf, b\u00e0i m\u1eabu c\u00f3 th\u1ec3 gi\u00fap b\u1ea1n hi\u1ec3u c\u00e1ch t\u1ed5 ch\u1ee9c m\u1ed9t b\u00e0i lu\u1eadn, nh\u01b0ng kh\u00f4ng th\u1ec3 thay th\u1ebf kh\u1ea3 n\u0103ng t\u1ef1 ph\u00e1t tri\u1ec3n \u00fd.<\/span><\/p>\n

\u0110\u00e2y c\u0169ng l\u00e0 l\u00fd do nhi\u1ec1u b\u1ea1n g\u1eb7p t\u00ecnh hu\u1ed1ng quen thu\u1ed9c: \u0111\u1ecdc \u0111\u1ec1 th\u00ec hi\u1ec3u, bi\u1ebft kh\u00e1 nhi\u1ec1u t\u1eeb v\u1ef1ng, nh\u01b0ng khi b\u1eaft \u0111\u1ea7u vi\u1ebft l\u1ea1i kh\u00f4ng bi\u1ebft m\u00ecnh n\u00ean l\u1eadp lu\u1eadn \u0111i\u1ec1u g\u00ec.<\/span><\/p>\n

Tin vui l\u00e0 IELTS kh\u00f4ng ch\u1ea5m \u0111i\u1ec3m d\u1ef1a tr\u00ean vi\u1ec7c \u00fd t\u01b0\u1edfng c\u1ee7a b\u1ea1n \u201c\u0111\u1ed9c \u0111\u00e1o\u201d \u0111\u1ebfn \u0111\u00e2u. Gi\u00e1m kh\u1ea3o \u0111\u00e1nh gi\u00e1 m\u1ee9c \u0111\u1ed9 tr\u1ea3 l\u1eddi \u0111\u00fang c\u00e2u h\u1ecfi, ph\u00e1t tri\u1ec3n \u00fd r\u00f5 r\u00e0ng, t\u1ed5 ch\u1ee9c logic v\u00e0 s\u1eed d\u1ee5ng ng\u00f4n ng\u1eef hi\u1ec7u qu\u1ea3 qua b\u1ed1n ti\u00eau ch\u00ed ch\u00ednh th\u1ee9c c\u1ee7a IELTS.<\/span><\/p>\n

This article<\/span> ETEST<\/span><\/a> s\u1ebd h\u01b0\u1edbng d\u1eabn c\u00e1ch ph\u00e1t tri\u1ec3n \u00fd theo m\u1ed9t quy tr\u00ecnh th\u1ef1c t\u1ebf, gi\u00fap b\u1ea1n vi\u1ebft \u0111\u01b0\u1ee3c b\u00e0i lu\u1eadn c\u1ee7a ch\u00ednh m\u00ecnh m\u00e0 kh\u00f4ng c\u1ea7n h\u1ecdc thu\u1ed9c.<\/span><\/p>\n

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C\u00e1ch ph\u00e1t tri\u1ec3n \u00fd cho IELTS Writing m\u00e0 kh\u00f4ng h\u1ecdc thu\u1ed9c b\u00e0i m\u1eabu<\/figcaption><\/figure>\n

V\u00ec sao h\u1ecdc thu\u1ed9c b\u00e0i m\u1eabu th\u01b0\u1eddng kh\u00f4ng hi\u1ec7u qu\u1ea3?\u00a0<\/b><\/h2>\n

B\u00e0i m\u1eabu ch\u1ec9 cho b\u1ea1n k\u1ebft qu\u1ea3 cu\u1ed1i c\u00f9ng. \u0110i\u1ec1u b\u1ea1n c\u1ea7n h\u1ecdc l\u1ea1i l\u00e0 qu\u00e1 tr\u00ecnh t\u1ea1o ra \u00fd t\u01b0\u1edfng.<\/span><\/p>\n

M\u1ed9t b\u00e0i Band 7 kh\u00f4ng nh\u1ea5t thi\u1ebft c\u00f3 quan \u0111i\u1ec3m \u0111\u1eb7c bi\u1ec7t. Theo m\u00f4 t\u1ea3 ch\u00ednh th\u1ee9c c\u1ee7a IELTS, \u0111i\u1ec1u quan tr\u1ecdng l\u00e0 ng\u01b0\u1eddi vi\u1ebft ph\u1ea3i tr\u1ea3 l\u1eddi \u0111\u1ea7y \u0111\u1ee7 \u0111\u1ec1 b\u00e0i, tr\u00ecnh b\u00e0y l\u1eadp tr\u01b0\u1eddng r\u00f5 r\u00e0ng v\u00e0 ph\u00e1t tri\u1ec3n c\u00e1c \u00fd ch\u00ednh b\u1eb1ng gi\u1ea3i th\u00edch ho\u1eb7c v\u00ed d\u1ee5 ph\u00f9 h\u1ee3p.<\/span><\/p>\n

N\u00f3i \u0111\u01a1n gi\u1ea3n, gi\u00e1m kh\u1ea3o kh\u00f4ng \u0111\u00e1nh gi\u00e1 b\u00e0i vi\u1ebft b\u1eb1ng c\u00e1ch h\u1ecfi:<\/span><\/p>\n

\u201c\u00dd t\u01b0\u1edfng n\u00e0y c\u00f3 m\u1edbi hay \u0111\u1ed9c \u0111\u00e1o kh\u00f4ng?\u201d<\/span><\/p>\n

\u0110i\u1ec1u h\u1ecd th\u1ef1c s\u1ef1 quan t\u00e2m l\u00e0:<\/span><\/p>\n

\u201c\u00dd t\u01b0\u1edfng c\u00f3 tr\u1ea3 l\u1eddi \u0111\u00fang \u0111\u1ec1, \u0111\u01b0\u1ee3c gi\u1ea3i th\u00edch r\u00f5 v\u00e0 c\u00f3 v\u00ed d\u1ee5 ho\u1eb7c l\u1eadp lu\u1eadn \u0111\u1ee7 thuy\u1ebft ph\u1ee5c hay kh\u00f4ng?\u201d<\/span><\/p>\n

V\u00ec v\u1eady, khi luy\u1ec7n IELTS Writing, m\u1ee5c ti\u00eau kh\u00f4ng ph\u1ea3i l\u00e0 h\u1ecdc thu\u1ed9c th\u1eadt nhi\u1ec1u b\u00e0i m\u1eabu. Quan tr\u1ecdng h\u01a1n l\u00e0 r\u00e8n m\u1ed9t c\u00e1ch ph\u00e1t tri\u1ec3n \u00fd \u0111\u1ec3 d\u00f9 g\u1eb7p \u0111\u1ec1 n\u00e0o, b\u1ea1n c\u0169ng c\u00f3 th\u1ec3 t\u1ef1 x\u00e2y d\u1ef1ng l\u1eadp lu\u1eadn c\u1ee7a ch\u00ednh m\u00ecnh.<\/span><\/p>\n

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V\u00ec sao h\u1ecdc thu\u1ed9c b\u00e0i m\u1eabu th\u01b0\u1eddng kh\u00f4ng hi\u1ec7u qu\u1ea3?\u00a0<\/figcaption><\/figure>\n

B\u01b0\u1edbc 1: \u0110\u1eebng v\u1ed9i vi\u1ebft, h\u00e3y t\u00e1ch \u0111\u00fang y\u00eau c\u1ea7u c\u1ee7a \u0111\u1ec1<\/b><\/h3>\n

\u0110\u00e2y l\u00e0 l\u1ed7i khi\u1ebfn nhi\u1ec1u b\u00e0i b\u1ecb m\u1ea5t \u0111i\u1ec3m Task Response.<\/span><\/p>\n

V\u00ed d\u1ee5 \u0111\u1ec1:<\/span><\/p>\n

Some people think children should spend less time on screens. To what extent do you agree or disagree?<\/span><\/p>\n

Thay v\u00ec ngh\u0129 ngay \u0111\u1ebfn \u201cscreen time\u201d, h\u00e3y t\u00e1ch \u0111\u1ec1 th\u00e0nh ba ph\u1ea7n:<\/span><\/p>\n

Topic: Screen time c\u1ee7a tr\u1ebb em<\/span><\/p>\n

Task: Agree\/ Disagree<\/span><\/p>\n

Goal: \u0110\u01b0a l\u1eadp tr\u01b0\u1eddng + ph\u00e1t tri\u1ec3n lu\u1eadn \u0111i\u1ec3m<\/span><\/p>\n

R\u1ea5t nhi\u1ec1u h\u1ecdc sinh ch\u1ec9 vi\u1ebft v\u1ec1 l\u1ee3i \u00edch v\u00e0 t\u00e1c h\u1ea1i c\u1ee7a m\u00e0n h\u00ecnh, nh\u01b0ng qu\u00ean m\u1ea5t \u0111\u1ec1 \u0111ang h\u1ecfi m\u1ee9c \u0111\u1ed9 \u0111\u1ed3ng \u00fd. Khi \u0111\u00f3, b\u00e0i vi\u1ebft d\u1ec5 b\u1ecb lan man d\u00f9 v\u1ed1n t\u1eeb kh\u00e1 t\u1ed1t.<\/span><\/p>\n

Tr\u01b0\u1edbc khi vi\u1ebft d\u00e0n \u00fd, h\u00e3y th\u1eed tr\u1ea3 l\u1eddi \u0111\u1ec1 trong m\u1ed9t c\u00e2u ng\u1eafn. N\u1ebfu b\u1ea1n v\u1eabn ch\u01b0a th\u1ec3 n\u00f3i r\u00f5 quan \u0111i\u1ec3m c\u1ee7a m\u00ecnh ch\u1ec9 b\u1eb1ng m\u1ed9t c\u00e2u, r\u1ea5t c\u00f3 th\u1ec3 b\u1ea1n ch\u01b0a hi\u1ec3u \u0111\u00fang y\u00eau c\u1ea7u c\u1ee7a \u0111\u1ec1.<\/span><\/p>\n

B\u01b0\u1edbc 2: M\u1ed7i body ch\u1ec9 n\u00ean c\u00f3 m\u1ed9t \u00fd l\u1edbn<\/b><\/h3>\n

M\u1ed9t l\u1ed7i ph\u1ed5 bi\u1ebfn kh\u00e1c l\u00e0 nh\u1ed3i qu\u00e1 nhi\u1ec1u \u00fd v\u00e0o c\u00f9ng m\u1ed9t \u0111o\u1ea1n.<\/span><\/p>\n

Thay v\u00ec vi\u1ebft:<\/span><\/p>\n

Screens are harmful because they affect health, education, family relationships, sleep and creativity.<\/span><\/p>\n

H\u00e3y ch\u1ecdn m\u1ed9t \u00fd v\u00e0 \u0111\u00e0o s\u00e2u n\u00f3.<\/span><\/p>\n

For example:<\/span><\/p>\n

Main idea: Excessive screen time reduces children’s concentration.<\/span><\/p>\n

Sau \u0111\u00f3 ph\u00e1t tri\u1ec3n theo c\u00f4ng th\u1ee9c:<\/span><\/p>\n

Idea \u2014> Why \u2014> Example \u2014> Result<\/b><\/p>\n

V\u00ed d\u1ee5 tri\u1ec3n khai:<\/span><\/p>\n

Children often switch rapidly between videos and games, making it harder to maintain attention on longer academic tasks. As a result, they may struggle to focus during lessons or while reading books.<\/span><\/p>\n

\u0110o\u1ea1n v\u0103n n\u00e0y kh\u00f4ng d\u00f9ng t\u1eeb v\u1ef1ng qu\u00e1 kh\u00f3, nh\u01b0ng c\u00f3 l\u1eadp lu\u1eadn r\u00f5 r\u00e0ng.<\/span><\/p>\n

B\u01b0\u1edbc 3: \u0110\u1eb7t \u0111\u00fang c\u00e2u h\u1ecfi \u0111\u1ec3 t\u1ef1 t\u1ea1o \u00fd t\u01b0\u1edfng\u00a0<\/b><\/h2>\n

Khi b\u1ea1n b\u00ed \u00fd t\u01b0\u1edfng vi\u1ebft, \u0111\u1eebng ngh\u0129 \u0111\u1ebfn b\u00e0i m\u1eabu. R\u1ea5t nhi\u1ec1u h\u1ecdc sinh khi g\u1eb7p \u0111\u1ec1 m\u1edbi s\u1ebd t\u1ef1 h\u1ecfi: \u201c\u0110\u1ec1 n\u00e0y gi\u1ed1ng b\u00e0i m\u1eabu n\u00e0o m\u00ecnh \u0111\u00e3 h\u1ecdc?\u201d<\/span><\/p>\n

M\u1ed9t c\u00e1ch hi\u1ec7u qu\u1ea3 h\u01a1n l\u00e0 \u0111\u1eb7t 4 c\u00e2u h\u1ecfi \u0111\u01a1n gi\u1ea3n \u0111\u1ec3 t\u1ef1 ph\u00e1t tri\u1ec3n l\u1eadp lu\u1eadn.<\/span><\/p>\n\n\n\n\n\n\n\n
Question<\/span><\/td>\nGi\u00fap b\u1ea1n l\u00e0m g\u00ec?<\/span><\/td>\n<\/tr>\n
Why does this happen?<\/span><\/td>\nT\u00ecm nguy\u00ean nh\u00e2n<\/span><\/td>\n<\/tr>\n
Who is affected?<\/span><\/td>\nX\u00e1c \u0111\u1ecbnh \u0111\u1ed1i t\u01b0\u1ee3ng<\/span><\/td>\n<\/tr>\n
What is the consequence?<\/span><\/td>\nPh\u00e2n t\u00edch h\u1ec7 qu\u1ea3<\/span><\/td>\n<\/tr>\n
Can I give a realistic example?<\/span><\/td>\nTh\u00eam v\u00ed d\u1ee5 \u0111\u1ec3 h\u1ed7 tr\u1ee3 \u00fd<\/span><\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<\/tbody>\n<\/table>\n

V\u00ed d\u1ee5: \u0110\u1ec1 v\u1ec1 remote work<\/span><\/p>\n

Thay v\u00ec c\u1ed1 nh\u1edb m\u1ed9t b\u00e0i m\u1eabu, h\u00e3y tr\u1ea3 l\u1eddi l\u1ea7n l\u01b0\u1ee3t:<\/span><\/p>\n