{"id":8663,"date":"2020-08-30T02:23:14","date_gmt":"2020-08-29T19:23:14","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/etest.edu.vn\/?p=8663"},"modified":"2024-07-19T10:58:38","modified_gmt":"2024-07-19T03:58:38","slug":"bai-giai-ielts-writing-task-1-11-07-2020-band-8-0-tu-ielts-examiner","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/etest.edu.vn\/en\/bai-giai-ielts-writing-task-1-11-07-2020-band-8-0-tu-ielts-examiner\/","title":{"rendered":"IELTS Writing Task 1 Solution (July 11, 2020) Band 8.0+ from IELTS Examiner"},"content":{"rendered":"<div><strong>Luy\u1ec7n t\u1eadp, luy\u1ec7n t\u1eadp, luy\u1ec7n t\u1eadp kh\u00f4ng ng\u1eebng ch\u00ednh l\u00e0 c\u00e1ch t\u1ed1t nh\u1ea5t \u0111\u1ec3 n\u00e2ng cao kh\u1ea3 n\u0103ng <a href=\"https:\/\/etest.edu.vn\/en\/ielts-writing\/\">Writing<\/a> &#8211; m\u1ed9t trong nh\u1eefng k\u1ef9 n\u0103ng g\u00e2y kh\u00f3 d\u1ec5 v\u1edbi nhi\u1ec1u th\u00ed sinh. Ch\u00ednh v\u00ec th\u1ebf, \u0111\u01b0\u1ee3c luy\u1ec7n t\u1eadp v\u00e0 h\u1ecdc h\u1ecfi t\u1eeb ch\u00ednh b\u00e0i gi\u1ea3i m\u1eabu c\u1ee7a c\u00e1c gi\u00e1m kh\u1ea3o IELTS s\u1ebd \u0111em \u0111\u1ebfn l\u1ee3i th\u1ebf c\u1ef1c kh\u1ee7ng \u0111\u1ec3 c\u1ea3i thi\u1ec7n tr\u00ecnh vi\u1ebft c\u1ee7a ch\u00ednh m\u00ecnh. C\u00f9ng \u0111\u1ebfn v\u1edbi b\u00e0i gi\u1ea3i \u0111\u1ec1 thi <a href=\"https:\/\/etest.edu.vn\/en\/bai-mau-ielts-writing-task-1\/\">IELTS Writing Task 1<\/a> v\u00e0o ng\u00e0y 11\/07 v\u1eeba qua \u0111\u01b0\u1ee3c vi\u1ebft b\u1edfi c\u1ef1u gi\u00e1m kh\u1ea3o IELTS, \u0111\u1ed9c quy\u1ec1n t\u1ea1i ETEST Vietnam.<\/strong><\/div>\n<blockquote>\n<div>\n<p><span style=\"color: #9c1619;\"><span style=\"color: #9c1619;\"><strong>Task 1: The line graph shows the percentage of renewable energy generation over total energy produced in 6 countries from 2010 to 2013. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. <\/strong><\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<\/div>\n<div><\/div>\n<\/blockquote>\n<div><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignnone size-medium wp-image-8664 aligncenter\" src=\"https:\/\/etest.edu.vn\/wp-content\/uploads\/2020\/08\/image-4-01-509x400.png\" alt=\"\" width=\"509\" height=\"400\" srcset=\"https:\/\/etest.edu.vn\/wp-content\/uploads\/2020\/08\/image-4-01-509x400.png 509w, https:\/\/etest.edu.vn\/wp-content\/uploads\/2020\/08\/image-4-01-768x603.png 768w, https:\/\/etest.edu.vn\/wp-content\/uploads\/2020\/08\/image-4-01-1018x800.png 1018w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 509px) 100vw, 509px\" \/><\/div>\n<div><\/div>\n<div>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">The provided line graph shows the proportion of green energy various countries are producing, in percentage from the year 2010 to 2013.\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Overall, all nations increased their production of renewables over the entire period, with Germany being the largest <\/span><span style=\"color: #9c1619;\"><b>powerhouse<\/b><\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">; India, Spain, and France occupying middles positions; and China finishing with the least amount.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">A closer look into the graph reveals that China\u2019s production in 2010 was only one-tenth of total renewable sources. This number rose to roughly 13% in 2011 at which point it <\/span><span style=\"color: #9c1619;\"><b>leveled off<\/b><\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"> for the next year. By 2013, China had increased its green energy supply to a mere 14%. France and Spain followed similar <\/span><span style=\"color: #9c1619;\"><b>trajectories<\/b><\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"> over the time period, with the Spaniards leading the French only slightly. In 2010 France was consuming nearly 13% green energy, whereas Spain was at roughly 14%. By 2013, France was at 15% and Spain 15.5% approximately.\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Turning to India, the nation began the time period at nearly 17.5%, <\/span><span style=\"color: #9c1619;\"><b>dipped down to<\/b><\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"> just over 15% in 2011, and back up to around 18%, finishing only slightly higher at the end of the period than at the beginning. The US fluctuated between just under 20% in 2010, 16% in 2011, and ultimately <\/span><span style=\"color: #9c1619;\"><b>peeking <\/b><\/span>print<span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"> 2013 at just over 20%. Lastly, Germany was the largest producer of clean energy overall, beginning the period at 16% and finishing right at the 25% mark.<\/span><\/p>\n<\/div>\n<div><em>( Count: 230 words)<\/em><\/div>\n<div>\n<h4 dir=\"ltr\"><em>Useful phrases that appear in the article:<\/em><\/h4>\n<ul>\n<li dir=\"ltr\"><b>powerhouse <\/b>(n)\u00a0: nh\u00e0 m\u00e1y n\u0103ng l\u01b0\u1ee3ng<\/li>\n<li dir=\"ltr\"><b>level-off<\/b> : ch\u1eefng l\u1ea1i<\/li>\n<li dir=\"ltr\"><b>trajectory<\/b>\u00a0(n)\u00a0: qu\u1ef9 \u0111\u1ea1o, \u0111\u01b0\u1eddng \u0111i<\/li>\n<li dir=\"ltr\"><b>dip down to<\/b>\u00a0: gi\u1ea3m xu\u1ed1ng, tr\u0169ng xu\u1ed1ng<\/li>\n<li dir=\"ltr\"><b>peek\u00a0<\/b>(v)\u00a0: \u0111\u1ea1t \u0111\u1ec9nh cao nh\u1ea5t<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<blockquote><p>See program details <a href=\"https:\/\/etest.edu.vn\/en\/ielts-la-gi\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">IELTS English<\/a> at ETEST and to receive <a href=\"https:\/\/etest.edu.vn\/en\/tu-hoc-ielts\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">IELTS learning roadmap<\/a> Personalized to your goals and free IELTS test at ETEST Study Abroad English<\/p><\/blockquote>\n<p><center><a href=\"https:\/\/etest.edu.vn\/en\/khoa-hoc\/luyen-thi-ielts\/\" target=\"_self\" class=\"button primary is-outline\"  style=\"border-radius:10px;\">\n    <span>IELTS English Course<\/span>\n  <\/a>\n<\/center><\/div>\n\n\n<div class=\"kk-star-ratings kksr-auto kksr-align-left kksr-valign-bottom\"\n    data-payload='{&quot;align&quot;:&quot;left&quot;,&quot;id&quot;:&quot;8663&quot;,&quot;slug&quot;:&quot;default&quot;,&quot;valign&quot;:&quot;bottom&quot;,&quot;ignore&quot;:&quot;&quot;,&quot;reference&quot;:&quot;auto&quot;,&quot;class&quot;:&quot;&quot;,&quot;count&quot;:&quot;0&quot;,&quot;legendonly&quot;:&quot;&quot;,&quot;readonly&quot;:&quot;&quot;,&quot;score&quot;:&quot;0&quot;,&quot;starsonly&quot;:&quot;&quot;,&quot;best&quot;:&quot;5&quot;,&quot;gap&quot;:&quot;5&quot;,&quot;greet&quot;:&quot;\u0110\u00e1nh gi\u00e1 b\u00e0i vi\u1ebft&quot;,&quot;legend&quot;:&quot;0\\\/5 - (0 votes)&quot;,&quot;size&quot;:&quot;24&quot;,&quot;title&quot;:&quot;B\u00e0i gi\u1ea3i IELTS Writing Task 1 (11\\\/07\\\/2020) Band 8.0+ t\u1eeb IELTS Examiner&quot;,&quot;width&quot;:&quot;0&quot;,&quot;_legend&quot;:&quot;{score}\\\/{best} - ({count} {votes})&quot;,&quot;font_factor&quot;:&quot;1.25&quot;}'>\n            \n<div class=\"kksr-stars\">\n    \n<div class=\"kksr-stars-inactive\">\n            <div class=\"kksr-star\" data-star=\"1\" style=\"padding-right: 5px\">\n            \n\n<div class=\"kksr-icon\" style=\"width: 24px; height: 24px;\"><\/div>\n        <\/div>\n            <div class=\"kksr-star\" data-star=\"2\" style=\"padding-right: 5px\">\n            \n\n<div class=\"kksr-icon\" style=\"width: 24px; height: 24px;\"><\/div>\n        <\/div>\n            <div class=\"kksr-star\" data-star=\"3\" style=\"padding-right: 5px\">\n            \n\n<div class=\"kksr-icon\" style=\"width: 24px; height: 24px;\"><\/div>\n        <\/div>\n            <div class=\"kksr-star\" data-star=\"4\" style=\"padding-right: 5px\">\n            \n\n<div class=\"kksr-icon\" style=\"width: 24px; height: 24px;\"><\/div>\n        <\/div>\n            <div class=\"kksr-star\" data-star=\"5\" style=\"padding-right: 5px\">\n            \n\n<div class=\"kksr-icon\" style=\"width: 24px; height: 24px;\"><\/div>\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n<div class=\"kksr-stars-active\" style=\"width: 0px;\">\n            <div class=\"kksr-star\" style=\"padding-right: 5px\">\n            \n\n<div class=\"kksr-icon\" style=\"width: 24px; height: 24px;\"><\/div>\n        <\/div>\n            <div class=\"kksr-star\" style=\"padding-right: 5px\">\n            \n\n<div class=\"kksr-icon\" style=\"width: 24px; height: 24px;\"><\/div>\n        <\/div>\n            <div class=\"kksr-star\" style=\"padding-right: 5px\">\n            \n\n<div class=\"kksr-icon\" style=\"width: 24px; height: 24px;\"><\/div>\n        <\/div>\n            <div class=\"kksr-star\" style=\"padding-right: 5px\">\n            \n\n<div class=\"kksr-icon\" style=\"width: 24px; height: 24px;\"><\/div>\n        <\/div>\n            <div class=\"kksr-star\" style=\"padding-right: 5px\">\n            \n\n<div class=\"kksr-icon\" style=\"width: 24px; height: 24px;\"><\/div>\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n<\/div>\n                \n\n<div class=\"kksr-legend\" style=\"font-size: 19.2px;\">\n            <span class=\"kksr-muted\">Rate this article<\/span>\n    <\/div>\n    <\/div>","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Luy\u1ec7n t\u1eadp, luy\u1ec7n t\u1eadp, luy\u1ec7n t\u1eadp kh\u00f4ng ng\u1eebng ch\u00ednh l\u00e0 c\u00e1ch t\u1ed1t nh\u1ea5t \u0111\u1ec3 n\u00e2ng cao kh\u1ea3 n\u0103ng Writing &#8211; m\u1ed9t trong nh\u1eefng k\u1ef9 n\u0103ng g\u00e2y kh\u00f3 d\u1ec5 v\u1edbi nhi\u1ec1u th\u00ed sinh. 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