{"id":9227,"date":"2021-04-22T16:42:56","date_gmt":"2021-04-22T09:42:56","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/etest.edu.vn\/?p=9227"},"modified":"2024-07-31T14:07:16","modified_gmt":"2024-07-31T07:07:16","slug":"bai-giai-ielts-writing-task-1-band-9-0-tu-cuu-ielts-examiner-fish-pie-process","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/etest.edu.vn\/en\/bai-giai-ielts-writing-task-1-band-9-0-tu-cuu-ielts-examiner-fish-pie-process\/","title":{"rendered":"IELTS Writing Task 1 Band 9.0 Solution from Former IELTS Examiner (Fish Pie Process)"},"content":{"rendered":"<div><strong>One of the two &quot;deaths&quot; that IELTS candidates must face in the exam <a href=\"https:\/\/etest.edu.vn\/en\/ielts-writing\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">IELTS Writing<\/a> The Process format is considered quite difficult for most candidates. In addition to filtering information, the Process format also requires a variety of vocabulary appropriate to the topic being tested. Therefore, preparing thoroughly from high-band sample solutions will help you a lot before entering the real exam room. Let&#039;s go to the exam solution <a href=\"https:\/\/etest.edu.vn\/en\/bai-mau-ielts-writing-task-1\/\">IELTS Writing Task 1<\/a> Band 9.0 \u2013 Process format written by former IELTS examiner.<\/strong><\/div>\n<div><\/div>\n<blockquote>\n<div>\n<p><span style=\"color: #9c1619;\"><span style=\"color: #9c1619;\"><strong>Task 1: The diagrams below give information about the manufacture of frozen fish pies.<\/strong><\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"color: #9c1619;\"><span style=\"color: #9c1619;\"><strong>Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.<\/strong><\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<\/div>\n<\/blockquote>\n<div><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignnone size-medium wp-image-9229 aligncenter\" src=\"https:\/\/etest.edu.vn\/wp-content\/uploads\/2021\/04\/Writing-Task1-Process-03-04-551x400.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"551\" height=\"400\" srcset=\"https:\/\/etest.edu.vn\/wp-content\/uploads\/2021\/04\/Writing-Task1-Process-03-04-551x400.jpg 551w, https:\/\/etest.edu.vn\/wp-content\/uploads\/2021\/04\/Writing-Task1-Process-03-04-768x558.jpg 768w, https:\/\/etest.edu.vn\/wp-content\/uploads\/2021\/04\/Writing-Task1-Process-03-04-1102x800.jpg 1102w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 551px) 100vw, 551px\" \/><\/div>\n<div><\/div>\n<div>\n<p>The pictures <span style=\"color: #9c1619;\"><strong>illustrate<\/strong><\/span> the <span style=\"color: #9c1619;\"><strong>ingredients<\/strong><\/span> that goes into a <span style=\"color: #9c1619;\"><strong>factory-made fish pie<\/strong><\/span>, and the various steps in its production.<\/p>\n<p>The pie contains salmon, peas, sauce and potatoes, and there are ten stages in its <span style=\"color: #9c1619;\"><strong>manufacture<\/strong><\/span>, from <span style=\"color: #9c1619;\"><strong>delivery<\/strong><\/span> big <strong><span style=\"color: #9c1619;\">dispatch<\/span><\/strong>. One of the ingredients, potato, <strong><span style=\"color: #9c1619;\">goes through<\/span><\/strong> its own <span style=\"color: #9c1619;\"><strong>six-stage preparation process<\/strong><\/span> before it can be added to the pie.<\/p>\n<p>Potatoes are the first ingredient to be prepared on the <span style=\"color: #9c1619;\"><strong>production line<\/strong><\/span>. They are delivered to the factory up to a month before the process begins, and they must be cleaned, <span style=\"color: #9c1619;\"><strong>peeled<\/strong><\/span> and <strong><span style=\"color: #9c1619;\">sliced<\/span><\/strong>. Potato peelings are thrown away, and the sliced potatoes are <span style=\"color: #9c1619;\"><strong>boiled<\/strong><\/span>, then <span style=\"color: #9c1619;\"><strong>chilled<\/strong><\/span> and <span style=\"color: #9c1619;\"><strong>stored<\/strong><\/span>.<\/p>\n<p>When fresh salmon arrives at the factory, lemon juice and salt are added, and the fish is cooked in a <span style=\"color: #9c1619;\"><strong>steam oven<\/strong><\/span> within 12 hours of delivery. Next, factory workers remove and <span style=\"color: #9c1619;\"><strong>dispose<\/strong><\/span> of the skin and bones, and the fish is <span style=\"color: #9c1619;\"><strong>inspected<\/strong><\/span>. Following inspection, pre-prepared peas, sauce and potatoes are added. The resulting fish pies are <span style=\"color: #9c1619;\"><strong>wrapped<\/strong><\/span>, frozen and then stored or dispatched.<\/p>\n<p><em style=\"color: #333333;\">(Count: 175 words)<\/em><\/p>\n<\/div>\n<div>\n<div>\n<div><em>Useful phrases that appear in the article:<\/em><\/div>\n<div>\n<ul>\n<li dir=\"ltr\"><b>illustrate\u00a0<\/b>(verb) : describe<\/li>\n<li dir=\"ltr\"><strong>ingredient\u00a0<\/strong>(noun): ingredient<\/li>\n<li dir=\"ltr\"><strong>factory-made fish pie\u00a0<\/strong>: fish cakes are produced from the factory<\/li>\n<li dir=\"ltr\"><strong>manufacture<\/strong> (verb) : produce, manufacture<\/li>\n<li dir=\"ltr\"><strong>delivery\u00a0<\/strong>(noun) : transportation<\/li>\n<li dir=\"ltr\"><strong>dispatch <\/strong>(noun) : the sending of goods<\/li>\n<li dir=\"ltr\"><strong>go through<\/strong> (verb) : to go through<\/li>\n<li dir=\"ltr\"><strong>six-stage preparation process<\/strong>\u00a0: 6 step preparation process<\/li>\n<li dir=\"ltr\"><strong>production line<\/strong>\u00a0(noun) : production line<\/li>\n<li dir=\"ltr\"><strong>peel\u00a0<\/strong>(verb) : peel<\/li>\n<li dir=\"ltr\"><strong>slice\u00a0<\/strong>(verb) : slice<\/li>\n<li><strong>boil\u00a0<\/strong>(verb) : heat<\/li>\n<li><strong>chill\u00a0<\/strong>(verb) : to cool<\/li>\n<li><strong>store\u00a0<\/strong>(verb) : store, reserve, keep in stock<\/li>\n<li dir=\"ltr\"><strong>steam oven<\/strong> (noun) : oven<\/li>\n<li dir=\"ltr\"><strong>dispose <\/strong>(verb) : throw away<\/li>\n<li dir=\"ltr\"><strong>inspect\u00a0<\/strong>(verb) : check<\/li>\n<li dir=\"ltr\"><strong>wrap\u00a0<\/strong>(verb) : wrap up<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<p><span style=\"font-size: 80%;\"><em>Source: IELTS Simon<\/em><\/span><\/p>\n<blockquote><p>See program details <a href=\"https:\/\/etest.edu.vn\/en\/ielts-la-gi\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">IELTS English<\/a> at ETEST and to receive <a href=\"https:\/\/etest.edu.vn\/en\/tu-hoc-ielts\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">IELTS learning roadmap<\/a> Personalized to your goals and free IELTS test at ETEST Study Abroad English<\/p><\/blockquote>\n<p><center><a href=\"https:\/\/etest.edu.vn\/en\/khoa-hoc\/luyen-thi-ielts\/\" target=\"_self\" class=\"button primary is-outline\"  style=\"border-radius:10px;\">\n    <span>IELTS English Course<\/span>\n  <\/a>\n<\/center><\/div>\n\n\n<div class=\"kk-star-ratings kksr-auto kksr-align-left kksr-valign-bottom\"\n    data-payload='{&quot;align&quot;:&quot;left&quot;,&quot;id&quot;:&quot;9227&quot;,&quot;slug&quot;:&quot;default&quot;,&quot;valign&quot;:&quot;bottom&quot;,&quot;ignore&quot;:&quot;&quot;,&quot;reference&quot;:&quot;auto&quot;,&quot;class&quot;:&quot;&quot;,&quot;count&quot;:&quot;0&quot;,&quot;legendonly&quot;:&quot;&quot;,&quot;readonly&quot;:&quot;&quot;,&quot;score&quot;:&quot;0&quot;,&quot;starsonly&quot;:&quot;&quot;,&quot;best&quot;:&quot;5&quot;,&quot;gap&quot;:&quot;5&quot;,&quot;greet&quot;:&quot;\u0110\u00e1nh gi\u00e1 b\u00e0i vi\u1ebft&quot;,&quot;legend&quot;:&quot;0\\\/5 - (0 votes)&quot;,&quot;size&quot;:&quot;24&quot;,&quot;title&quot;:&quot;B\u00e0i gi\u1ea3i IELTS Writing Task 1 Band 9.0 t\u1eeb c\u1ef1u IELTS Examiner (Fish Pie Process)&quot;,&quot;width&quot;:&quot;0&quot;,&quot;_legend&quot;:&quot;{score}\\\/{best} - ({count} {votes})&quot;,&quot;font_factor&quot;:&quot;1.25&quot;}'>\n            \n<div class=\"kksr-stars\">\n    \n<div class=\"kksr-stars-inactive\">\n            <div class=\"kksr-star\" data-star=\"1\" style=\"padding-right: 5px\">\n            \n\n<div class=\"kksr-icon\" style=\"width: 24px; 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