{"id":9273,"date":"2021-05-23T17:03:51","date_gmt":"2021-05-23T10:03:51","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/etest.edu.vn\/?p=9273"},"modified":"2024-06-21T10:50:35","modified_gmt":"2024-06-21T03:50:35","slug":"bai-giai-ielts-writing-task-2-24-04-2021-band-8-0-tu-ielts-examiner","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/etest.edu.vn\/en\/bai-giai-ielts-writing-task-2-24-04-2021-band-8-0-tu-ielts-examiner\/","title":{"rendered":"IELTS Writing Task 2 Solution (April 24, 2021) Band 8.0+ from IELTS Examiner"},"content":{"rendered":"<div><strong>The development of technology is a concern not only in reality but also in the IELTS exam. With the development of smart technologies, what will happen? What aspects will it affect? Is this a positive development or not? That is the question of the exam. <a href=\"https:\/\/etest.edu.vn\/en\/cac-dang-bai-ielts-writing-task-2\/\">IELTS Writing Task 2<\/a> was just launched in Vietnam on April 24, 2021. Join ETEST in analyzing the IELTS Writing test solution written by a former IELTS examiner, exclusively at ETEST Vietnam.<\/strong><\/div>\n<blockquote><p><span style=\"color: #9c1619;\"><span style=\"color: #9c1619;\"><strong>Task 2: Today different types of robots are developed which are good friends to us and help us both at home and work. <\/strong><\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"color: #9c1619;\"><span style=\"color: #9c1619;\"><strong>Is this a positive or negative development?<\/strong><\/span><\/span><\/p><\/blockquote>\n<div><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignnone size-medium wp-image-9274 aligncenter\" src=\"https:\/\/etest.edu.vn\/wp-content\/uploads\/2021\/05\/robot-07-765x400.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"765\" height=\"400\" srcset=\"https:\/\/etest.edu.vn\/wp-content\/uploads\/2021\/05\/robot-07-765x400.jpg 765w, https:\/\/etest.edu.vn\/wp-content\/uploads\/2021\/05\/robot-07-768x402.jpg 768w, https:\/\/etest.edu.vn\/wp-content\/uploads\/2021\/05\/robot-07-1400x732.jpg 1400w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 765px) 100vw, 765px\" \/><\/div>\n<div>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">A large variety of <\/span><span style=\"color: #9c1619;\"><b>highly advanced<\/b><\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"> machines have <span style=\"color: #9c1619;\"><strong>impacted<\/strong><\/span> nearly every <span style=\"color: #9c1619;\"><strong>aspect<\/strong><\/span> of modern life and society; from the design of towns and cities, to the <span style=\"color: #9c1619;\"><strong>layout<\/strong><\/span> of homes and automobiles, machines have changed the world. Currently, <\/span><span style=\"color: #9c1619;\"><b>autonomous devices<\/b><\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"> aid people at both their <span style=\"color: #9c1619;\"><strong>dwellings<\/strong><\/span> and their workplaces. This essay will discuss the advantages that these <\/span><span style=\"color: #9c1619;\"><b>technical marvels<\/b><\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"> present to modern people.\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"color: #9c1619;\"><b>Laborious housework<\/b><\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"> has all but <\/span><span style=\"color: #9c1619;\"><b>become a thing of the past<\/b><\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">. Firstly, it is no longer the case that people need to do much hand washing of clothing and dishes for eating. For example, in many homes around the globe, devices like <span style=\"color: #9c1619;\"><strong>garment washing machines<\/strong><\/span>, dishwashers, and automated <\/span>vacuum cleaners<b>:<\/b><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"> like the Roomba, assist <span style=\"color: #9c1619;\"><strong>residents<\/strong><\/span> in completing their previously <\/span><span style=\"color: #9c1619;\"><b>backbreaking household chores<\/b><\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">. Secondly, <\/span>extreme heat and cold<span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"> are no longer issues for many people. With the <span style=\"color: #9c1619;\"><strong>advent<\/strong> <\/span>of the <span style=\"color: #9c1619;\"><strong>programmable<\/strong><\/span> electric heater and air conditioner, <span style=\"color: #9c1619;\"><strong>mastery<\/strong><\/span> of the internal temperature of the home <\/span>has become a reality<span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">. The next paragraph will discuss workplace machines.\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">The typical office has been transformed by the installation of various pieces of robot-like equipment. Some companies have employed the usage of automatic mail delivering machines. Although this has taken some work away from human employees, it has also guaranteed <\/span>quick and efficient<span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"> delivery of important documents. Another <span style=\"color: #9c1619;\"><strong>massive<\/strong><\/span> time-saver is the modern-day photocopier. Far from them <span style=\"color: #9c1619;\"><strong>predecessors<\/strong><\/span>, these newer machines can be programmed to perform many tasks such as the sorting of documentation to the stapling of custom sized booklets.\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">In conclusion, robot-like machines have been extremely beneficial to modern man. They have increased <span style=\"color: #9c1619;\"><strong>leisure time<\/strong><\/span> by making housework <\/span>less<span style=\"color: #9c1619;\"><b> labor intensive<\/b><\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">, they have allowed people to <\/span><span style=\"color: #9c1619;\"><b>regulate <\/b><\/span>the temperature<span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"> of their homes regardless of the season, and they have improved <span style=\"color: #9c1619;\"><strong>corporate efficiency<\/strong><\/span>. In the future, people all over the world may have more free time <span style=\"color: #9c1619;\"><strong>undertake<\/strong> <\/span>creative projects thanks to technological advancements.\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><em style=\"color: #333333; font-size: 14.4px;\">(Count: 310 words)<\/em><\/p>\n<\/div>\n<div>\n<h4 dir=\"ltr\"><em>Useful phrases that appear in the article:<\/em><\/h4>\n<ul>\n<li dir=\"ltr\"><b>highly advanced<\/b>\u00a0: high-class<\/li>\n<li dir=\"ltr\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><strong>impact\u00a0<\/strong>(v) : influence, impact<\/span><\/li>\n<li dir=\"ltr\"><b><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><strong>aspect<\/strong><\/span> <\/b>(n) : aspect<\/li>\n<li dir=\"ltr\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><strong>layout <\/strong>(n) : arrangement, layout<\/span><\/li>\n<li dir=\"ltr\"><strong><b>autonomous device<\/b>\u00a0<\/strong>(n) : automatic device<\/li>\n<li dir=\"ltr\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><strong>dwelling <\/strong>(n)<\/span>\u00a0: housing<\/li>\n<li dir=\"ltr\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><strong><b>technical marvel<\/b>\u00a0<\/strong>(n) : engineering wonder<\/span><\/li>\n<li dir=\"ltr\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><b>laborious housework<\/b> (n): heavy, difficult housework<\/span><\/li>\n<li dir=\"ltr\"><b>become a thing of the past<\/b> : become a thing of the past<\/li>\n<li dir=\"ltr\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><strong>garment washing machine\u00a0<\/strong>(n) : washing machine<\/span><\/li>\n<li dir=\"ltr\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><strong>resident\u00a0<\/strong>(n)<\/span>\u00a0: residents<\/li>\n<li dir=\"ltr\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><b>backbreaking household chores<\/b>\u00a0: hard housework<\/span><\/li>\n<li dir=\"ltr\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><strong>advent\u00a0<\/strong>(n)<\/span> : birth<\/li>\n<li dir=\"ltr\"><strong>programmable <\/strong>(adj) : pre-programmed<\/li>\n<li dir=\"ltr\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><strong>mastery\u00a0<\/strong>(n) : the mastery of something<\/span><\/li>\n<li dir=\"ltr\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><strong>massive\u00a0<\/strong><\/span>(adj) : vast<\/li>\n<li dir=\"ltr\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><strong>predecessor\u00a0<\/strong>(n) : predecessor \u2013 that which comes before<\/span><\/li>\n<li dir=\"ltr\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><strong>leisure time<\/strong>\u00a0(n) : free time<\/span><\/li>\n<li dir=\"ltr\"><b>labor intensive\u00a0<span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">(n) : hard work<\/span><\/b><\/li>\n<li dir=\"ltr\"><b>regulate<span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><strong>\u00a0<\/strong>(v) : adjust<\/span><\/b><\/li>\n<li dir=\"ltr\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><strong>corporate efficiency\u00a0<\/strong>(n) : the efficiency of a company, of a business<\/span><\/li>\n<li dir=\"ltr\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><strong>undertake<\/strong>\u00a0(v) : to take on, to shoulder<\/span><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>Refer to the IELTS English course with output commitment at ETEST Study Abroad English<\/p>\n<\/div>\n<p><center><a href=\"https:\/\/etest.edu.vn\/en\/khoa-hoc\/luyen-thi-ielts\/\" target=\"_self\" class=\"button primary is-outline\"  style=\"border-radius:10px;\">\n    <span>IELTS Course<\/span>\n  <\/a>\n<\/center><\/p>\n\n\n<div class=\"kk-star-ratings kksr-auto kksr-align-left kksr-valign-bottom\"\n    data-payload='{&quot;align&quot;:&quot;left&quot;,&quot;id&quot;:&quot;9273&quot;,&quot;slug&quot;:&quot;default&quot;,&quot;valign&quot;:&quot;bottom&quot;,&quot;ignore&quot;:&quot;&quot;,&quot;reference&quot;:&quot;auto&quot;,&quot;class&quot;:&quot;&quot;,&quot;count&quot;:&quot;0&quot;,&quot;legendonly&quot;:&quot;&quot;,&quot;readonly&quot;:&quot;&quot;,&quot;score&quot;:&quot;0&quot;,&quot;starsonly&quot;:&quot;&quot;,&quot;best&quot;:&quot;5&quot;,&quot;gap&quot;:&quot;5&quot;,&quot;greet&quot;:&quot;\u0110\u00e1nh gi\u00e1 b\u00e0i vi\u1ebft&quot;,&quot;legend&quot;:&quot;0\\\/5 - (0 votes)&quot;,&quot;size&quot;:&quot;24&quot;,&quot;title&quot;:&quot;B\u00e0i gi\u1ea3i IELTS Writing Task 2 (24\\\/04\\\/2021) Band 8.0+ t\u1eeb IELTS Examiner&quot;,&quot;width&quot;:&quot;0&quot;,&quot;_legend&quot;:&quot;{score}\\\/{best} - ({count} {votes})&quot;,&quot;font_factor&quot;:&quot;1.25&quot;}'>\n            \n<div class=\"kksr-stars\">\n    \n<div class=\"kksr-stars-inactive\">\n            <div class=\"kksr-star\" data-star=\"1\" style=\"padding-right: 5px\">\n            \n\n<div class=\"kksr-icon\" style=\"width: 24px; 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