IELTS Writing Task 1 Band 9.0 Solution from Former IELTS Examiner (Fish Pie Process)

One of the two "deaths" that IELTS candidates must face in the exam IELTS Writing The Process format is considered quite difficult for most candidates. In addition to filtering information, the Process format also requires a variety of vocabulary appropriate to the topic being tested. Therefore, preparing thoroughly from high-band sample solutions will help you a lot before entering the real exam room. Let's go to the exam solution IELTS Writing Task 1 Band 9.0 – Process format written by former IELTS examiner.

Task 1: The diagrams below give information about the manufacture of frozen fish pies.

IELTS TEST SAT TEST
Course Consulting

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

 

The pictures illustrate the ingredients that goes into a factory-made fish pie, and the various steps in its production.

The pie contains salmon, peas, sauce and potatoes, and there are ten stages in its manufacture, from delivery big dispatch. One of the ingredients, potato, goes through its own six-stage preparation process before it can be added to the pie.

Potatoes are the first ingredient to be prepared on the production line. They are delivered to the factory up to a month before the process begins, and they must be cleaned, peeled and sliced. Potato peelings are thrown away, and the sliced potatoes are boiled, then chilled and stored.

When fresh salmon arrives at the factory, lemon juice and salt are added, and the fish is cooked in a steam oven within 12 hours of delivery. Next, factory workers remove and dispose of the skin and bones, and the fish is inspected. Following inspection, pre-prepared peas, sauce and potatoes are added. The resulting fish pies are wrapped, frozen and then stored or dispatched.

(Count: 175 words)

Useful phrases that appear in the article:
  • illustrate (verb) : describe
  • ingredient (noun): ingredient
  • factory-made fish pie : fish cakes are produced from the factory
  • manufacture (verb) : produce, manufacture
  • delivery (noun) : transportation
  • dispatch (noun) : the sending of goods
  • go through (verb) : to go through
  • six-stage preparation process : 6 step preparation process
  • production line (noun) : production line
  • peel (verb) : peel
  • slice (verb) : slice
  • boil (verb) : heat
  • chill (verb) : to cool
  • store (verb) : store, reserve, keep in stock
  • steam oven (noun) : oven
  • dispose (verb) : throw away
  • inspect (verb) : check
  • wrap (verb) : wrap up

Source: IELTS Simon

See program details IELTS English at ETEST and to receive IELTS learning roadmap Personalized to your goals and free IELTS test at ETEST Study Abroad English

IELTS English Course
Rate this article

ETEST ENGLISH FOR STUDY ABROAD

Contact information:

  • Hotline: 0933 80 66 99 (District 3) | 0937 80 66 99 (District 7) | 0936 17 76 99 (Da Nang)
  • ETEST District 3: 3rd Floor, 215 Nam Ky Khoi Nghia, Anh Dang Building, Xuan Hoa Ward, HCMC
  • ETEST District 7: 6th Floor, 79 - 81 - 83 Hoang Van Thai, Saigon Bank Building, Tan My Ward, HCMC
  • ETEST Da Nang: No. 9, Road C2, Da Phuoc International Urban Area, Hai Chau Ward, Da Nang City

Explore now: Impressive achievements of ETEST students

Leave a Reply

Your email address will not be published. Required fields are marked *

Quick consultation


    Messenger Chat Messenger Zalo Chat Zalo ETEST Phone 093 380 6699

    Sign up for consultation

    Please leave your information below for free consultation.