Bài giải IELTS Writing đợt thi 27/06/2020 Band 8.0+ từ IELTS Examiner

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TASK 2: The qualities that help people reach success in modern life cannot be learned in university or other academic institutions. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Success does not carry the same meaning for everyone. Some people believe that the sources required to become successful cannot be taught in educational facilities and tertiary education. This essay will discuss the ideas above.

To begin, it is clear that some people are born with the skills required to become very successful in life. However, it is unclear what is meant by the word “success”. To some, success means having a happy family, while to others, success might represent financial security. In modern society, it seems to be getting harder and harder for people to specify what makes them happy. Advances in technology have allowed for the democratization of information via smart technology, affordable air-travel, and remote communication with friends and family. Still, researchers have noted increases in depression rates in countries all over the world. In some Asian countries where the family was traditionally the primary source of happiness and success, people have become lonelier and more depressed as they have adopted the materialistic lifestyle of the West. 

Although modern life seems to challenge certain types of success such as happiness, there are ways to learn the skills needed to lead a successful life. In fact, many universities and other educational institutions offer a wide range of courses and degree programs. If success means the accumulation of money and material wealth, students can learn financial management skills by studying business. If success refers to peace of mind and having an anxiety-free life, there are studies in mindfulness and philosophy that help learners understand how to lead a meaningful life. Furthermore, citizens who do not wish to enroll in a costly university program can attend public lectures and seminars where they can learn basic skills such as money management, meditation, and domestic management. 

In conclusion, it is not easy to define success. Some people are adamant that having money indicates success, while others see success in other achievements. It is clear that the road to success is not an easy one; however, through training and practice, the skills and qualities required for success can be mastered.

 

Các cụm từ hữu ích xuất hiện trong bài:

  • carry the same meaning : cùng ý nghĩa
  • educational facilities : các cơ sở giáo dục
  • financial security : sự bảo đảm tài chính
  • democratization of information : dân chủ hóa về thông tin
  • source of happiness and success : nguồn của sự hạnh phúc và thành công
  • materialistic lifestyle : lối sống vật chất 
  • accumulation of money and material wealth : tích lũy tiền bạc và của cải vật chất
  • public lectures and seminars : các bài giảng và hội thảo công cộng
  • adamant (adj) : kỷ cương, không thể lay chuyển

 

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